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A Tale Of Two Hearts

Novel By: thebrokenhearteddontsleep
Fantasy


What starts out as a typical high school love story becomes something far bigger, forcing two people to test their love and everything else. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Apr 5, 2008    Reads: 454    Comments: 14    Likes: 5   


I sighed as I ran my fingers through my long black hair, trying to make it through another boring monday night. I stretched and looked absently out the window. *ding* My computer went off and I snapped back to attention.

cybersmexy17 - OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!


A message from my best friend Emily popped up on my screen. Smiling slightly to myself, I started to wonder why me and Em get along so well. Emily is a typical blonde cheerleader type, blue eyed bombshell, flirty, popular, what every girl wanted to be. And me well I'm different. Black hair, deep blue eyes, pale skin, a little bit of a loner. What brings us together is our shared interest in vampires and fallen angels and everything other people consider legends.

vampire_goddess - whos the lucky guy this time em?
cybersmexy17 - ... y do u always assume theres a guy????
vampire_goddess - cuz i know u 2 well.. ^-^
cybersmexy17 - maybe its about something completely different
vampire_goddess - oh now i'm interested.. do tell
cybersmexy17 - ... ok so it is about a guy this time but one day it won't be and u'll feel sorry 4 assuming.
vampire_goddess - uhhuh whats his name?
cybersmexy17 - jay!! and he is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HAWT!! hes new at our skool and i accidentally bumped into him 2day and hes eyes jst about made me melt.
vampire_goddess - lol. i'm sure. so when r u goin out?
cybersmexy17 - 8( well thats the problem no matter what i did i couldn't get him to ask me.


I just about choked. Em has never ever ever not been able to get a guy to ask her out. She always gets what she wants when it comes to boys.

vampire_goddess - ...
cybersmexy17 - thing is he's not the kind of guy i usually go for
vampire_goddess - what kinda guy is he?
cybersmexy17 - almost gothic..
vampire_goddess - O.O what does he look like?
cybersmexy17 - dreamy black hair falling into perfect green eyes, pale skin, tight black t-shirt that shows off his really well built body.. slightly baggy black pants with a couple chains. dresses kinda like u actually which is y i was hoping u could help me?
vampire_goddess - and how would i do that?
cybersmexy17 - well i know he works at the coffee shop jst down from ur house.. and i know u guys would hit it off right away so if u could like make friends with him and then recommend that we go out..
vampire_goddess - *rolls eyes* ok i guess
cybersmexy17 - i owe u one hope.. like u have no idea!! *hugs*
vampire_goddess - yeah yeah i know. i'm gonna go check this kid out. i'll ttyl -peace outt-
cyber smexy17 - byes


I quickly signed off my computer and looked down at myself. Unusally tight jeans, black tank top.. It'd work. I ran a brush through my hair and grabbed a black hoodie and headed out my front door. Locking it behind me, I walked about 5 minutes till I got to downtown, or the lame excuse for a downtown we had in our small town. The coffee shop was right infront of me. I took a deep breath and walked in, smelling the amazing smell of the awesome pastrys they had here.

I looked at the counter and saw possibly the hottest guy I had ever seen. He was exactly how Em had descibed him. Black hair cut short in the back and longer in the front, falling into flawless green eyes. We were the only ones in the shop, and I blushed slightly as I felt his eyes go up and down my body. I turned to leave quickly.. I couldn't do this. Not even for Em.

"Hey.. wait!" I heard this unbelievably deep, but soft voice come from behind me. I froze, dammit! He slid over the counter and stood in front of me. "Whats your name?"

"Hope." I shoved my now sweaty hands into my hoodie pockets and tried to act uninterested. "You?"


"Jay." He flashed me a dazzling smile, I smiled slightly back, and tried to look cool. "Why are you leaving?"


"Umm.." I tried to think of a decent excuse. "Uh.. I was looking for my friend Emily but shes not here." I shrugged and tried slipped quickly around him heading for the door.


"Wait!" I turned around to look at him. "You should stay. Its wickedly boring in here and you look like a cool chick." Another dazzling smile. I opened my mouth to refuse but he grabbed my arm and pulled me to a table. "Cmon! Coffee on me." He raised an eyebrow and all I could do was roll my eyes. "Wait right here!" He demanded as he slipped back over the counter and dissapeared into some back room. I shrugged off my hoodie and started playing with a napkin that was sitting on the table. Jay quickly came back holding two steaming hot cups of black coffee.

"Thanks" I said as I took one from him.

"I didn't know what you took in your coffee so I just brought black, is that ok?"

"Yeah its fine." I took a small sip of the burning hot coffee as he took a seat across from me.

"So do you go to the high school?" He asked looking at me intently.

"Yup." I remembered my mission. I couldn't fall for this guy no matter how hot or charming he was. Em liked him. "My best friend Emily goes there too. Have you met her?"

"Emily?" His eyebrow raised once again. "You can't be talking about that blonde slut Emily who was throwing herself at me?"

My eyes shot up from my coffee, and I stared at him for a second. "Yeah, actually."

"Oh......" He looked away for a moment. "I'm sorry, I just didn't think.. that umm.." He stopped.

"That someone like me would be friends with a slut like her?" I raised an eyebrow.

"I.. I didn't mean it like that." He protested.

"Don't." I stood up, and grabbed my hoodie. "Thanks for the coffee." I turned around and quickly walked out. How was I gonna break this to Em.


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Comments:

I really like it! I'm in love with Jay already ^_^ but just as a warning, don't make this into a typical story you find everywhere, where the girl at first hates the guy, then falls for the guy, the gets mad at the guy, then gets back together with the guy.
So stay away from that and this will be very good! Your good at writing and the chat between Emily and Hope was totally realistic.

Posted: Apr 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! ^-^

omg, this is soooo amazing!!!!!

Posted: Apr 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! ^-^ Glad you like it!

OMG U ARE SO AWESOME!!! BEST BOOK EVER!!!!

Posted: Apr 7, 2008

Author Comment:

-_- dnt mock me kurtis lol

i realy like it. ill definitely be reading more later. but i have to write now, or ill die from writing withdrawal.

Posted: Apr 18, 2008

Author Comment:

^-^ I'm glad u like it!

ahahahahahahahahahahahha. good story megz. those two girls almost sound like me and u. :P

Posted: Apr 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hahahahahahahahaha. thx. and ya kinda. ^-^

I don't trust Jay -.- He's a little too pushy for my tastes. And he called her a chick! I don't know why but it irritates me when guys do that.

Good for Hope, walking out on him after he called her best friend a slut!

Posted: Apr 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Hehe. I agree. Thanks for reading! ^-^

One chapter down and am totally taken. Very catchy beginning. going off to read more!

Posted: Apr 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much for reading!! ^-^

Just starting to read this... great start! I don't trust Jay, though, either... i'm off to read more!

Posted: May 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Heh. I didn't expect people to feel that way. Wow. lol. Thats kewl tho.
Thanks for reading!!

uht oh. she liiiikes him

Posted: May 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol. Yup..

oh mn that's not a good thing to have to tell your friend. yoy have my attention.

Lydia_xxxx

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

Author Comment:

yay! attention is good. lol. thanks for reading!!


Awesome!!great begining!!xD__x

Posted: Jun 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much!!

Excellent; very interesting. Very good start.

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much! ^-^

HAHA!!! thts funny

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol. I'm glad you found it amusing.
Thanks for reading!!

Okay, how do I say this in the least gay way possible? Hm. Yeah this story is awesome so far, even though I'm not a fan of romance, from what little I've read of your work, I have a feeling this won't be the typical love story. In other words... it's looking fabulooooous. *cough* *manly voice* *cough*

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Bahahahahahahaha!!! Oh dear. I like you more and more all the time. lol. Uhm.. yeah. I don't know if its a typical love story or not.. but theres definitely a few twists in there. lol. I hope you like it. ^-^ Thanks for the comment!! xD



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