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I Want To Give You My Black Heart

Novel By: tisha666
Fantasy


An Emo girl falls inlove with a vampire... View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jun 9, 2008    Reads: 58    Comments: 4    Likes: 1   


Tisa was a regular 13 year old, high school girl. She was just starting 9th grade I mean, but this isn't about 9th grade, it was about 8th grade. She lived at home with her mom and step-dad but she was very poor. She was emo as I need to mention. If I didn't that change the entire story. Anyway...

Tisa was walking down the cluttered hallway of the ACMS. It was three months into the year and she had already made1 friend andlost one new friend. She was emo but still. Her name was Kathrine Meller. Her and and Tisa hated each other after Kat slept with her boyfriend. Tisa often day dreamed about killing her painfully after Nathaniel left Tisa for Kat. Anyway, Tisa was walking down the hallway and ran into Kat and Kat knocked all her books in the floor. "Sorry poser!" Kat said gigling with her slutty friends Kim and Miranda. Kim....How would you describe her? Mini-mini blue jean skirt, strawberry black tanktop that was see-through enough to show she was wearing no bra, black expensive eyeliner circling aroung her dark brown eyeball, bright-red lipstick, and her black hair with blond tips. Now Miranda, tight pants with her thong showing, high heeled boots that were black, dark brown shirt, and long flowing brown hair with black expensive eyeliner circling aroung her dark brown eyeball. But then there was Kat...black shoulder-length hair, green eyes covered with black eyeliner, black pants, and a black see-through top. She was the prettist of them all. OH yeah, now it's Tisa's turn. Blondish red hair, with bright blue eyes, black eyeliner, blue jeans with lace at bottom, a black motorcycle top, green emo shoes, and a pendent worshiping the devil. She didn't worship him though. Then Nathaniel walked up. Oh he was so cute. Black shaggy hair with red highlights, purple and black striped jacket, black shoes, bright green eyes, he looked like a gothic angel!!! The Kat ran up to him and kissed him and broke her concentration. "Oh look who's on the floor" Nathaniel said, "Tisa the Tissue." That's what everyone calls her. Oh oh, the tears started to come. There they are crawling down her cheeks. "Come on Kat" Nathaniel said, "Let's leave this freak alone." His words tore through her like a sword cutting her into. "Bye Dork!" Kim yelled. Suddenly Colin the weird gothic dude comes running up. "Tisa are you okay?" He said. Colin is in black pants and black shoes with eyeliner around hismysterious browneyes. His curlyshaggy brownhair top his tanned skin. "I'm fine Colin." Tisa said with a fake smile on her face.

When Tisa got home she found her mom and dad fighting so she ran into her tiny room of the trailer. Her walls was covered in blood colored paint. She ran over to her pillow and listen to the pircing words of her mom and step-dad. She waited to hear her mom scream then that was her que. Her mom screamed and Tisa grabbed her baseball bat to go break up the fight. She ran outside and screamed "Will you please shut up!!!!!!!!!!!" She said and ran over to hit her step dad in the back over the head. "Not this time girly." Her step dad said and grabbed the baseball bat out of her hands and through it across the room. He let go of her mom and grab Tisa by the neck. "I....can't.....breath." Tisa said gasping for air. He started beating her head againest the floor. She felt the blood running from her nose and lips and she felt her head get cut by the wooden floor. She didn't cry though. He stopped and ran into her room and grabbed her rist cutting knife from her drawer. He ran back into the living room grabbed her rists and cut a deep cut into her rist. Tisa felt the sharp pain of the knife againest her skin but she couldn't see who was cutting her rist cause of the blood covering her eyes. Finally after finishing cutting her, he picked her up and carried her into her room and laid her down on her bed. He un bottoned his pants and flipped Tisa over on her front side and removed her pants and under wear. He took off his pant sand underwear and raped her right then and there.


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I want to kill the dad. can I kill him? plaz plaz plaz! I'll kick his azz LUCKY 13 STYLE.

Posted: Jun 9, 2008

Author Comment:

GO ahead even though he isn't real. Have u read the second chapter?

Wow, that poor girl. I think we should al team up together and murder her dad! Yeah, that's it! Let's kill himn!
*ahem*
..sorry...Anway, I loved it. I can't wait to read more! =D

Posted: Jun 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx. I added 1&2

dying to have me read it, huh? well, i'm glad i did. this is great. not great about her step dad though, he's an a*shole.

Lydia_xxxx

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

I kno right? Have u read the other chapters?

Well this was not nice. Have to read on and and see where this is going.

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe enjoy!!!!!!!



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