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Giya and Gendiya

Novel By: Tremaine Raisa
Fantasy


Giya Saunders is about to be thrown into a world she never dreamed even existed. Her recent and very public breakup has started the wheels turning in her life. Soon she'll realize just who she is, and what she's capable of, make some very cool, but strange new friends, and save the world as she knows it. But is love included in this new facet of her life......? View table of contents...

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Submitted: Oct 31, 2007    Reads: 94    Comments: 4    Likes: 1   


“Giya, telephone!”
 

Her mother’s voice cut through her soothing water simulator like a knife. With a heavy sigh, Giya rolled onto her side, picked up her receiver and called “Got it” to her mother. She really didn’t feel up to conversation.

 
“Hello, Giya Saunders speaking. Who is this and how – “
 
“Giya, where are you?”
 

“Tracy!” Giya sat straight up in bed. “ I’m at home, duh. Where are you?” she asked, listening closely to distinguish the sounds in Tracy’s background. “Is that party music I hear?”

 

“Yes! Why aren’t you here? I told you about Mark’s party weeks ago!”

 

“No1” Giya cried. She had forgotten all about the party, all about everything in the wake of her recent breakup. As the events of the past week drifted across her mind, the wave of depression she had become all too acquainted with washed over her.

 
“Well, I hope you have fun. Toodles.”
 
“Wait a minute! What do you mean ‘toodles’? You’re coming!”
 
“No, Tracy, I can’t – “
 

“Yes, you can. Get dressed quickly, I sent Tavarez McKenzie to get you.”

 

“Tavarez McKenzie?” Tavarez was the second best looking guy at school. The best looking guy was a senior whose name no body knew. The third best looking was Travis Newman, Giya’s ex-boyfriend.

 
“How did you get Tavarez to come for me?” Giya asked
 

“Well it wasn’t really that hard. He asked for you when he saw me. I told him you were at home and that I’d call you, and then he said he’d pick you up. Ya ’know I think he likes you.”

 
“Yeah right” Giya said incredulously.
 

“I’m serious. Will you just get up and get dressed? He should be there any minute. I already asked your mother if it was ok and she said sure. Hurry up. Put on that little two- piece you like so much, and wear something cute over it. You need to get out and breathe G. This’ll be fun. Now, GET UP!”

 
“Tracey, you are absolutely –“
 

“Amazing? Yeah, I know. Now go and get dressed. You know you shouldn’t keep Tavarez waiting. Toodles.”

 
“Toodles.”


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Comments:

toodles! heheeheehehehehehehe i think thats a funny word......good chapter and story

Posted: Oct 31, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you!! I love the word toodles. it just sounds so CUTE!!

keep it up I liked the start so far!

Posted: Nov 11, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks a lot!!! I'll try to post the rest soon!

this is really interesting, i enjoyed it!!!!

Posted: Dec 12, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank You!!!!!!!!!

Hey! It's a really good story so far! It's realistic and i can believe it really well. There are some parts which are a tad bit confusing, but I'm sure that when i read more it will make more sense! Maybe something more you can add in is setting. But overal it's really good and i'm excited to read more!

Posted: Jan 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! Hmmm, setting, you know, you may be onto something.



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