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the land of broken dreams

Novel By: vahndelfire
Fantasy


It is a story about a boy and his adventures in a digital world I based him and his friends of me and mine and alot of the stuff in here is like stuff that has happend to me View table of contents...

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Submitted: Apr 8, 2008    Reads: 87    Comments: 1    Likes: 3   


Chapter one: the beginnings
As I sat in room 139 waiting for the bell to ring. I pondered about wither or not my dream set came in a dream set is login gear to the land of broken dreams a new cutting edge game that is a virtual reality game you are put inside the game so to speak. My friends Arron and James said they should be in today. It cost me a fortune to get it brand new set; well of course the whole game is new (lol). “MR. Sky are you on earth or in the clouds,” said my teacher. I looked up at her in a daze. “Do you know the answer to the question I just asked?” She added.
“Newton’s law of gravity” I said with my voice breaking the class roared with laughter shouts of insults and name calling came from the jocks I looked over at them in anger. “Don’t call me names,” I yelled at them.
“MR. Sky would you like to see me outside please,” said my teacher who’s name is Mrs. Landing. I stood up and a spit wad hit me in the cheek I looked to see Ryan Thompson holding a straw and laughing. I lunged over the chair and slammed into him I threw a punch at him but he caught it.
“Wimp” he said and a punch hit me in the face the pain from it was unbearable he tackled me to the ground and began to hit me until I blacked out. I later woke up in the nurse’s office. The nurse walked over to me and handed me a glass of water.
“What happened?” I said holding my eye, which hurt like hell. I felt heat emitting from it.
“You just got yourself a very bad beating bout twenty minutes ago,” she said as I sat up I began to drink. The water seemed to feel like needles going down my throat. “For a seventeen year old your pretty cocky you know that? Picking a fight with the basket ball captain you got guts” she said with a smile. Then it hit me Broken dreams.
“Can I go?” I said very quickly looking at the time. I set my eyes on my mother standing in the doorway I don’t know how long she was standing there but she did not look happy. “Mom” I said standing up it even hurt to stand.
“Are you okay sweetie?” she said hugging me close, ugh I thought; I hate when she dose that.
“I’m fine can we go?” I said looking at her.
“Yes, yes we can go oh and by the way you got a package today I think it’s that game you have been waiting for.” She said. My eyes light up like bright star do, just before they go super nova.
“Well then come on lets go” I grabbed her hand and pulled her though the door and to the car. When we got home I ran inside and looked around the house franticly till I saw small box about the size of a 24 pack of cola. “That’s it,” I said looking at it I picked it up and took it to my room when I opened the box there were two things in it. A book and a weird looking headset that was like a futuristic army microphone. I opened the book.
BROKEN DREAMS INSTRUCTIONS
To activate your head set you just say on into the mouth piece then it will lead you from there when you are in the DREAM. You will not talk into your headset; every thing is done though your mind that is how it is so realistic. You will be able to feel wet, wind, heat, cold to certain degrees you will be able to taste and you can feel a small bit of pain; all of which is simulated not really happening. Now hook up and have fun =)
I put the instructions down on the table next to my bed I put on the headset and took a deep breath. “On” I said I felt a shock though my body I was zooming though a tunnel made up of what looked likes little micro chips, but then I opened my eyes I was laying on the floor. “Ouch that hurt I had hit my head while falling. I looked at the instruction book WARNING: you should not operate while standing up make sure you are safely sited in a comfortable passion on your bed, chair, or couch.
“Oh I see,” I said so I sat down in my computer chair and said “on” again I was zipping tough the same tunnel till I reached a desk with a lady standing at it.
“Hello you are at the start up desk for all new accounts by rules and regulations of the broken dreams committee you are only allowed one account per person if you are caught with multiple accounts you will be deleted and not allowed to play broken dreams again now may I ask you for your real name.”
“Oh umm Cody Sky” I said putting my hand to her chest to see if it would go through her body but instead I grabbed her breast “yikes I’m so sorry lady” I yell and stepped back.
“Okay Oh umm Cody Sky is that your name” she said.
“No it’s Cody Sky,” I said.
“Okay Cody Sky have you decided on the name of your character keep in mind this will be the only name you will be allowed?”
I had been thinking about this for weeks ever since I got my manual I know everything that I wanted to be. “Vahn Delfire” I said looking at her she typed something into the computer.
“Now you must choose a race remember also this will effect your class and certain abilities that you may use.
“Yes the race I have chosen is Angelian.”
“Thank you Vahn Delfire you may step though the door to my right your left to design your character” she said. I walked over to the door (I feel as if I really was walking man this is amazing.) The door opened and the room was black I stepped in a voice sounded, “Please think of what you want to look like so I may animate your body?” I though of a white haired blue eyed person about 6 ft 240 lbs muscular build.
“Thank you,” the voice said and a body appeared.
“Wow! It look exactly like I pictured it to” I said looking at the hallowed body.
“You will be transported into the world in 5 seconds have a great day” said the voice.


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Comments:

Wow! No time to read tonight but you have really done some writing, so well done.

Posted: Apr 8, 2008

Author Comment:

I hope you do and also read love is my nindo that is the story im really going to write on the most



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