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The Sweetest Kiss

Novel By: vampirelovers
Fantasy


Cassidi's birthday is slowly comming up and when she finds out what happens on that day will change her life forever... View table of contents...

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Submitted: Sep 29, 2008    Reads: 256    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


Chapter 1. The Strange Visitor

“Cassidi Rae get up right now this is the 6th time I have been in here to wake you up. Aren’t you the least bit excited that it’s your birthday??” my mom said. “Alright mom I’m up see wide awake” I said as I stuck my tongue out at her. She just smiled and walked out closing the door behind her. My room is black, which just happens to be my favorite color. I don’t know how to explain it but I have always been attracted to black. I got up and went over to my walk-in closet and grabbed a black mini skirt and a dark magenta tank top that said “eyes on my face not my chest” and then I put on my black high top converse shoes. I combed my long purplehair.I know its weird that that is the color of my hair but it has alwaysbeen like that and ikinda like it.I walked down the stairs (my room was in the attic) and got into the kitchen to find a cake covered in black frosting waiting for me. There was a note beside it so I picked it up.

Dear Cassidi,
I’m sorry yourdad and I couldn’t stay later but there are a few things we have to deal with
Love,
Mom
(hmmmmm I wonder types of things I thought). We will be back in time for your birthday. There are a lot of things we need to talk to you about. Have a good day.

I got my car keys and went to my black Lamborghini and left out mansion and headed to school. The whole school day was totally a drag. It’s not that I don’t have a boyfriend I’m one of the prettiest girls in school, I’m just tired of guys trying to get into my pants (or mini skirt). So after school I talked to some of my best friends and then headed home. When I got there I noticed a moving truck and a car that I didn’t recognize. “MOM DAD IM HOME” I yelled when I walked into the house. “We’re in the den darling” my mom called so I walked over there and was completely shocked at what I saw.

Standing before me was a guy that looked like a total GOD! I didn't realize what he was doing until he leaned down and kissed me. His kiss was the sweetest kiss i have ever tasted. It tasted like blood and chocolate. I was still in shock when he pulled away and said with the hottest voice ever "This is the Cassidi I have been hearing about all day. It is a pleasure to finally meet you" "I-I-It's a p-p-pleasure meeting you to" I stuttered. (What is wrong with meI thought I have never stuttered before!) "So ummm you know my name could i please have yours??" i asked sweetely. "Well of course you may Cassidi where are my manners? My name is Blake."

"Cassidi please sit down" mydad said. So I went and sat down across my mom and father and suprise suprise Blake sat down beside me holding my hand. "Well" my dad began "like your mother said in the note we have some stuff to tell you. So im just going to start with the beging. You are a vampire and you are betrothed to Blake."

"I'm what!?!?!?!" I yelled at my dad. "Now sweetie" he said "I know it's a big change but since you turn 16 today you will be turning into a vampire. We will be going to the vampire realm so you and Blake can get married."

"So is Blake a vampire as well??" i asked. This time Blake answered, "No I am a Fallen Angel. There has been a war between the Vampires and Fallen Angels for centries now and we are going to put an end to it. I am the Prince of all Fallen Angels and you are the Princess of all Vampires."

"Will it hurt when I change into a Vampire?? and how am I a princess??" I asked. Now it was my mom's turn to answer my questions. "No honey it won't hurt. You will be asleep when the transformation happens, and we will be takeing you to the King and Queen tonight. That is why we were away ealier we were talking to your parents to have your arrangments for when you go home." I was so shocked I fainted.


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Comments:

Heya :)

Liked the beginning of the story, but you might want to re-check where you put dots and comma's. I figured you forgot them here and there.
I'd like to read more!

iMazed

Posted: Sep 29, 2008

Author Comment:

wow thanks this is the first time i have written a novel. im glad you liked it im working on the second chapter right now. ill make sure i check the dots and stuff so thanks i could use all the help i can get :)

Love the plot. No really. Love it xD.
But I suggest making it a little slower and adding spaces for the dialogue. (It just makes it look cooler xD!)
Also, the one part that I found strange was how she was so accepting of being a vampire princess and etc.
Oh also, some backround would be fun. :D.
-feels sad for so many sad comments-
BUT I LIKED IT. >.<
update me, ja? :D

Posted: Oct 1, 2008

Author Comment:

ok ill do that thanks all make ummmmmmmm i think my nxt chapter a bockground one but idk and ill keep you undated :)



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