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Kingdom of the Black Feather

Novel By: volleyballchick
Fantasy


A love story about two kids and how their love grew as did their friendship. Yet an interfierence came afoot. A deamon with humoungus black wings noticed the boy (Shane's) weakness was Carmen (the girl). So he kidnapped Carmen. Now Shane discovered where this deamon rules. Now Shane and his companions are on their way to save Carmen. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jun 24, 2008    Reads: 50    Comments: 7    Likes: 2   


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Persephone pushed Shane toward a door. "Now inside is Norm. She is the destiny fairy, don't show any emotion for she'll take your face and feed it to her love. Remember, DON'T lie!" she warned Shane. Shane gulped. Prsephone pushed him in. Inside was empty only a girl floating in the air."Um, are you Norm?" Shane said looking away. She walked on air toward him, "Yes I am. Let me have a look at you." She tuurned his head toward her. Shane looked at her, no expression. Norm had short brown hair and magical blue eyes.

"You're in love, yet so young," Norm gasped. Shane almost blushed until he remembered, no emotion. "I guess," he replied. She spun her sparkling dress, "Isn't it such a wonderful feeling?" Shane tried not to smile and burst out with feeling. "Yes," he replied. She walked up to him, "The girl you love is in danger is she not?" Shane nodded, no expression. "Well believe it or not you can save her. It's your destiny. You have the harvest moon staff,plus love. Now all you need is help."

"From?" Shane asked. Norm smiled, "You will be surprised actually. Do you knowwhat a mermaidis?" Shane shook his head. "Water creatures," she went on. Shane wanted to roll on the floor and laugh, but he couldn't. "I'm familiar with mermaids, " he replied. She grinned, "There a vine weaver with a speacial bow and arrow will be your partner. Good Bye!" With a flick of her wrist Shane wooshed out the door.

Persephone laughed at him, "So she kicked you out?" Shane shook his head, "No I know what I have to do. We have to go to Mermaid Island. You know, the creature that doesn't excist? Yeah well we have to o their." Persephone lifted an eyebrow, "Well I know whereMermaid Islandis. I think I can make a portal that far."

Shane nodded, "We have a plan." Persephone smiled and opened a portal behind her.


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Comments:

Okay totally loving this so far!!!!! write more soon! =) Mandy

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

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thanx

WOW!!! I love this story! I NEED to know what happens next!

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

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yping right now :D

U entwisted a cartoon with your novel, risky... let's see how it plays out

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

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you'll see in do time :D

me likey!!
haha
promise you'll keep me updated on it
!!

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

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Umkay! U know if you're a fan you get automaticaly updated?

LOVEIT

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

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(:

well I've got to say it's good, I hate to be anal about this but watch your spelling a little

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

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:)

a lovely story from a talented mind ,
don't ever lose that imagination .

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

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