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Kingdom of the Black Feather

Novel By: volleyballchick
Fantasy


A love story about two kids and how their love grew as did their friendship. Yet an interfierence came afoot. A deamon with humoungus black wings noticed the boy (Shane's) weakness was Carmen (the girl). So he kidnapped Carmen. Now Shane discovered where this deamon rules. Now Shane and his companions are on their way to save Carmen. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jun 27, 2008    Reads: 43    Comments: 2    Likes: 3   


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Carmen sat on a couch in the white room. Furious at what Shadow has done to her. She thaught she was a monster. Even though she turned into an angel, still she felt...unhuman like. She sat knees toward her chest. Just then she thaught about herself as an angel. Heavenly like and majestic. Then Shadow was about to knock on the door. "How did I know that?" she thaught to herself. Shadow walked inside something in his hand.

He sat next to her and took her hand and put a chain in it. Carmen looked up, "What's this?" Shadow shrugged, "Gemini told me to give it to you. She said you wouldn't know how to use it anyway so here." But for some reason...Carmen knew exactly what it was. She did an evil smile. "Light, " she whispered. The chain glowed a very bright white light. Shadow shealded his eyes, "Ahh! What did you do!?!" Carmen smiled, "Using the Pure Angel Craft threw the White Angel Chain! Don't underestimate me Shadow!" Shadow's darkness melted off of his bones. Carmen winced at the messy site.

She looked at the window on the high cieling. She looked at her hand. She raised it in the air, "Light!!" Light shot threw her arm,, to her finger tips, and shattered the glass above. "What was that!" she heard Sukii yelled. Carmen thaught a happy thaught. Then her feet liftted slowly off the floor. White glitter like substance circled her as she rose. Finally on the roof...she was stuck.

"Oh Carmen what is wrong with you! You escape and then you're stuck on the freakin roof!" Carmen yelled at herself. She heard Sukii comming near. Just then she got an Idea. She saw a...unicorn? She rubbed her eyes. There were four black unicorns below. "What in the name of the Devil happened to Shadow!" Yuko yelled. Carmen had no time. She jumped from the roof onto a unicorn's back. It went wild. Carmen accedentally screammed.

"She's down stairs, GO!" Sukii yelled. Carmen tried to calm it down. "Nice unicorn! Be calm!" she tried. She kissed the top of it's head. Then, from that kiss purificstion spread from the horn to the unicorn's back hoofs. It was now a nice pure white color. "I purified the horse...Er, unicorn!" she gasped. She saw knights comming. "Yahh!" Carmen said making the unicorn trot down the rocky path. The unicorn galloped down the grassy plain. Carmen patted the unicorn's main, "Good boy."

Carmen glanced back, no one. She took a deep breath. Carmen held on tight, "I heard Shadow and Sukii talking about Shane and Mermaid Ilsand. We have to go there...I knew he wasn't dead. We're gonna have to stop at a village or something and get a map." The Unicorn made a horse like noise, "Breeee!" Carmen patted his head and they galloped into the afternoon sun.

Book Two Comming Soon...

Kingdom of the Black Feather: Reunited

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PPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEE comment the last chapter of the book.

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Ahhh!!!!!
Yeah go Carmen!!!
Find Shane!!
can't wait until book two!!
:]

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

I can't either!



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