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The White One Is Evil

Novel By: WhatIsInAName
Fantasy


Haha where do I start.
Well I basically got the idea for this story from the Video
"The white one is evil" By Elliot Minor.

Elliot Minor is a 5 piece band from England who's music genre is like Rock/Classical.
They are really good. If you want to check them out.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rpo7A5xUNmM that the video in question.

This is their myspace if you want to have a look.

www.myspace.com/elliotminor

Please check them out because they are totally under-rated.

Anyway... my main character Alexander is based around Alex Davies who is one of the main singers in Elliot minor. At the time I confess I had the biggggggggest crush on him. I wrote this before and after I met him after one of his gigs. He's gorgeous haha. So I thought I'd upload this and see what you guys thought. I'd been really proud of it and showed my friend it and he had not gave me a very positive review. He told me my characters were not very well developed and like my grammar etc was terrible lol. I was like oh well.
So yeah... please let me know what you think. I fell in love with my characters and I really thought this was a good story but I suppose one mans treasure is another mans trash. Anyway please give it a read and let me know what you think... Im going to upload all the chapters now. View table of contents...

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Submitted: May 22, 2008    Reads: 22    Comments: 0    Likes: 1   




They went back to the cabin that night and Alexander gave Isabella his bed and he lay under the stars.
She couldn’t sleep. Neither could he.
Luna watched over till morning. Keeping her small black eyes on  the restless Isabella.


Morning came and both woke up to the loud song of birds. Alexander cooked some vegetables and served them to Isabella.
They ate in silence. Alexander watched her.
“ You seem sad.”
Isabella shook her head.
“ Smile.” Alexander said sweetly.
Isabella looked away. She couldn’t smile. She couldn’t go through with this.

“ Oh I see. Then I suppose I will have to give you something to make you smile?” with that Alexander ran off into the woods behind his house and produced a small white daisy. Isabella looked at it awkwardly and Alexander seemed disappointed. He began to pace back and forth.
“I know… I’ll make you laugh? I know how to entertain animals… humans are a different subject altogether.”

He placed his finger on his lip. He seemed to nod at some invisible entity beside him.
He then began to dance. Very Strangely. It was something like a jig and a Russian  folk dance mixed into one. By the time he was jumping around and leaping into the air she couldn’t help but begin laughing. An ear to ear smile appeared on Alexander’s face.
“I’m not a complete failure then.” he laughed. “Dance with me?”

He bowed quite low and held out his hand. Isabella looked unsurely at his hand for a moment before grabbing onto it.
“There’s no music” Isabella said softly.
“ Ah but we have the birds song.. And the sound of nature. Its much more interesting.”

Alexander pulled Isabella closer into him and placed his hands on her waist. She put her hands on his shoulder. They began moving slowly.
“Not bad… for a forest child” Isabella smirked.
“ Hey.. I do know some things about human culture.” Alexander smiled.
“I’m pleasantly surprised.” Isabella said happily.
Alexander spun her out of arms and then back in.
“Impressive.”
Alexander had a massive grin on his face.
“Am I the sort of girl you imagined?” Isabella asked suddenly.
“Much better.”
“ Good to know.” Isabella smiled.
“Forgive my bluntness but, you’re the most beautiful girl I’ve ever seen.”
“I’m probably one of the only girls you’ve ever seen.” Isabella said.
“Does that matter?”
“Not really.”
“Can I kiss you?” Alexander whispered.
Isabella stayed quiet  for a few seconds. Watching Alexander’s bright brown eyes widen.
“…yes."


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