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The blue dragon...

Novel By: Willi
Fantasy


There is no greater friendship than one between a boy and his dragon... View table of contents...

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Submitted: Apr 2, 2008    Reads: 99    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


Once upon a time, a little boy named sebastien who was nine years old, live in a small village called Zwenky. His father died in a war when he was four years old, so he doesn't know nothing about his father.His mom always said that his father was a brave man because his father choose to die for the village.One day his mom was so sick that everyone in the village thought that she's wasgoing to die.Then one day she decidded to talk to sebastien for what would be the last moment that she'd have with him, so she called him.When Sebatien came and saw his mom laying down on her bed he rain to her ,when he got near shesaid "Son it might be the last time you see me"

" What do you mean mom?" Sebastien said.

" Look under the bed you'll see a small box.Take it and open it.'" His mother said.

He did what his mom told him to do and when he opened the box and he saw a blue egg.

" What is it?" he asked.

" Its a dragon egg and you can't tell anyone about it."

"Why? its so cool it migth even help us win the war"

" Even though thats true there are peaple out there that want to destroyed dragon forever."

"Why are you giving this to me?"

" Becau-" She closed her eyes.

" Mom!"

No answer.

" Mom!"

He shook her shoulders, but she didn't move. He panicked and when someone came to check out why he was yelling he took the egg and ran away.


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Comments:

You did really good so far, the spelling is a little jumbled, but other than that, I understood it just fine.

I can't wait to see how you develop this. Let me know we you update it, okay?

~DarkFairy~

Posted: Apr 3, 2008

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Thanks

a little jumpy, but still good! keep on writing!

Posted: Apr 18, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks!

short and simple as ever!!

Very suspense so far!

Posted: May 30, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks!



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