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Crimson Demon Eyes

Novel By: xMychemicalromanceloverx
Fantasy


Demons roam the earth invisible to the human eye. Kiran is a teenager that is different from humans. He is a demon wolf. He keeps this secret from his best freind Chris. What will happen when she finds out?

This story is written in four different POVs. Please read all of them. View table of contents...

Chapters:

1 2

Submitted: Oct 6, 2008    Reads: 55    Comments: 6    Likes: 0   


Ch. 1 Arrival
My eyes scanned my room. Darkness had completely engulfed it. Screamo music blared through my stereo speakers. Frost bitten wind nipped at my skin. I kept my apartment freezing cold and it drove others crazy but that was the best part. Sighing, I sat up my bangs fells in front of my left eye. My thoughts wandered searching for someone’s thoughts hoping that I would find Chris’s.
I walked into the living room and sat down on the couch. My hand grasped a dagger lying on the coffee table tightly. I stretched out and chucked the dagger at the ceiling. Footsteps filled my ears. Cars rushed by. My eyes closed and I soon fell asleep.
The sound of tapping could be heard clearly… well to me it could. Chris’s thoughts filled my mind. My music still blared through the speakers. I rolled onto my side so my back faced the door. Soon the front door flew open. “HONEY I’m HOME!” Chris yelled. Rolling over I ended up on the floor. “Sheesh do you have to be so loud?” I asked glaring at her. “And I’m not gay.” I declared in a negative tone while standing up. My ability to read thoughts sometimes drove me insane; especially when Chris thought that I was gay.


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HELLO! If you want, you can chang urs to 'Crimson Eyes' ...it was already taken b4 b'c that was mine. lol, now mine's 'Everchanging Eyes' .. SO... it's all GOOD! : P

Posted: Oct 7, 2008

Author Comment:

nope im good i like my title

lol.. FUNNNY chanpter!

'“And I’m not gay.” I declared in a negative tone while standing up. My ability to read thoughts sometimes drove me insane; especially when Chris thought that I was gay'

FLAMER!!!

Posted: Oct 7, 2008

Author Comment:

lol i kno

F-L-A-M-E-R :)

-Chris

Posted: Oct 8, 2008

Author Comment:

-_- u stink - Kiran

F-l- a-m-e-r it was fantastico

Posted: Oct 8, 2008

Author Comment:

lol thnks - L.L

I'M NOT A FLAMER! -_- - Kiran

update already -.- I updated 2

Posted: Oct 20, 2008

i updated more on 'Everchanging Eyes'

Posted: Oct 22, 2008



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