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A boy named Aden is tricked in to falling in love with a girl who is actualy a vampire. Her name is Krista, all she wants is his blood, but when he is takin back to her castle, he meets her younger sister Lace who then convices her sister to let him go. Soon Aden is dragged in to a war between to sisters who are the same in power but then he learns somthign new about himself with the help of Lace. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Aug 19, 2008    Reads: 248    Comments: 5    Likes: 0   


Aden’s apartment was cold and dark, but as he led Karisa in to his room she felt safe and warm. She had only known him for a few days but in that time they had become very close, close enough that she let him take her back to his house after a nice date. Aden’s room was big and had a king size bed off to the side and a closet filled with nice clothes and other guy things. Aden went over to a dresser and turned on a small desk lamp that eliminated the large room. Karisa sat on the bed and let Aden sit next to her with his arm around her slender neck.
“Are you sure you really want to do this, I mean if not we could just go to a movie or something” Aden said looking in to Karisa’s large blue eyes, she smiled
“Aden, I want to be yours, for ever. I want to spend every moment with you, to look at you from dawn till dusk.” Karisa turned and sat on Aden’s lap, she felt him, big and strong, ready to do anything he wanted with her and she wasn’t going to say no. “Let me be yours” Karisa kissed Aden gently, Aden worked his hands underneath her light black sweatshirt and slowly took it off. Then Karisa took Aden’s shirt off, his muscles tight and breathing hard. He was so hot. He was pale and had short black hair and soft green eyes. He was buff, boy how Krista wanted him, all of him. Krista stood and undid her bra letting it fall, then Aden stood up and took her in his arms, with in a few seconds both were stripped of there clothes. They simply stared at each other for a moment then began a hot make out which led them to the bed. Karisa pulled away and made her self comfy on the bed. Aden smiled and then pulled himself on top of her. She looked so trusting and so ready, but something inside Aden made him want to run and hide. This wasn’t right, there was so much she didn’t know about him, and he wasn’t the kind of guy who lied to some one just to get it. He wasn’t the guy who was in to the one night stands.
“Karisa wait” Aden let Karisa straighten up a bit then continued “There’s something I have to tell you. I’m not who you think I am” Karisa gave him a sly smile that didn’t make sense. She slid her self out from under him and began to settle on top of him.

“That’s ok, I’m not who you think I am either” Karisa caressed Aden’s neck then he felt a sudden pain in his neck. His vision began to get blurry and his body limp. The last think he remembered was the sound of Karisa laughing and a man’s voice ordering someone to take him away.

Aden awoke some time later drowsy and alone. His head felt like he’d been kicked by a horse and his body still felt limp. HE took in his surroundings. HE was in a small caged in room with bars on the front and side walls. Every thing out side the bars was dark except for the small light coming from a half open door. Aden tried to move his arm to rub his head but he found that they were chained to the brick wall behind him. The door opened a little more and a young woman walked in. It wasn’t Karisa. She was tall and walked with a certain grace that Aden had never seen before. She walked to the bar door, pulled a key that was hanging form a chain on her neck and unlocked it. She slowly walked in.
“Who are you?” Aden asked some what frantic
“Do not fear me, I don’t wish to cause harm” her voice was rich and smooth; it seemed to float threw the air like a song. She walked over and knelt in front of Aden. She placed a cold hand on his wrist were the chain was, “It is a shame they keep you like this. It isn’t fair” She moved her hand from Aden’s wrist to his neck; he winced as she softly moved her fingers over a bight mark, “What a fool she is, to do this to you. Why must she be so…so bad?” She was talking to her self now. Aden took his hand that wasn’t chained up and placed it on what he could tell was her chin, she placed her hand over his, and “My name is Lace, my sister Karisa calls me Rani it means not worthy” The door opened again, this time with a force that sent it flying and hitting the wall.
“Rani, what is taking you so long? All you were suppose to do is get him ready for me” Aden recognized the girls voice, it was Karisa. She strolled in fallowed by a man.
“It’s Lace, and I was getting him ready for you” Lace backed away from Aden and stood with her head down. Karisa came over to her and smacked her.
“He’s mine you hear? Stay away from him” Lace looked at Aden then back at Karisa.
“What ever you say” Lace bowed then went to join the man that had fallowed Karisa in. Karisa made her way over to Aden who was still looking at Lace.
“Forget about her, she’s not worth it” Karisa whispered in his ear,
“What are you?” Aden asked Lace, she picked her head up and was about to speak when the man pushed her out of the room.
“We are goddesses of night and gods of the moon.” Karisa traced the outline of the bight marks in Aden’s neck, “I did a good job with you didn’t I?”
“You’re sick” Aden said
“Yes well, that’s your opinion” Karisa bent down and bit once again in to Aden’s neck. He lunged at the pain but Karisa and the chain around his wrist held him down. Karisa drank heavily while Aden grew weaker, then something ripped her off. It was Lace.
“Trying to be the hero again sis?” Karisa sneered at her, Lace glared back
“I’m no hero, I do the same as you only I do it better” Lace walked over to Aden and ripped the chain out of the wall. “I won’t let you hurt him any more! I’ve seen you toy with so many men, making them think you were the best thing ever then you trick them, bring them here and kill them. Not him, not this time, I’ll find you a different one, Karisa please let him be mine” Karisa’s face softened, Aden noticed the change in as Karisa became the weaker sister and Lace grew stronger.
“Fine, But I don’t have long before I need to feed off a whole human, so make it snappy and make it good” Karisa turned around and walked out with the man close behind her. Lace smiled and looked at Aden. He lay limply against the wall, his breathing was slow and blood still trickled from his neck.  
“Michael! Please I need your help!” Lace called in to the air. A cool breeze flew in threw the window, it swirled around the two of them then a man appeared. He was dressed like a guy you’d see playing an ape or Peter Pan. He had a leaf pair of shorts on and a vine strap crossing his big chest. He bent down and helped Lace up. She looked at him, and for a second Aden thought that maybe they were together but then quickly changed his mind.
“What is it my queen?” Michael said, bowing his head at Lace
“This is Aden, he was my sister’s toy, he is week and needs help” Michael looked at Aden,
“Another saved my queen, that’s a first in a while. Why him?” Lace bent down by Aden, he looked at her longingly.
“I just had to, now please take him to the shelters and help him. I will be there shortly” Michael nodded; he threw Aden over his shoulder and disappeared. Lace walked out of the room and to disappeared in to the vast darkness out side.

 


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Wow, this is really different. A new spin on vampires. I like it. You have made all of the characters ones that are worth reading more about.

Posted: Aug 21, 2008

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thnks lol thats like the nicest thing i've heard

i like it too aloott

Posted: Aug 21, 2008

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thnks :-)

Wow this is a cute story good for Lace to save him!

Posted: Aug 21, 2008

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thnks so much :-D

Cool:) Really different and creative.

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

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thnks :-D

wow this is really different...not the normal vampire stuff...good job...update if u could please

Posted: Oct 19, 2008

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i will soon lol thnks



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