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Trader in the kingdom

Novel By: xoAbbyxo
Fantasy


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Submitted: Nov 11, 2007    Reads: 71    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


The battle lasted for 2 days and nights, finally on the last night when the noon was high, the great king of Helm was killed and the repels had lost there leader. Franticly looking around for any survivors, Owen stumbled upon a warrior warring King Mignon’s color of arms. Cold blood was slowly flowing form the warrior’s side. Owen knew he had to help, but could he bring himself to help a warrior that had helped kill so many of his friends? He had to. Owen gently pickup up the warrior threw him over his shoulder and continued his search. After only finding a couple more survivors, Owen retreated to the woods for safe keeping. Once safely inside a cave one of the survivors and him started bandaging up the warrior with Mignon’s colors. Owen gently removed that warrior’s helmet, to reveal a young girl. Her long blond hair dropped from the helmet and laid flat on the leafy ground. Her face was smooth and young. She had long lashes and thin eye brows. She had a cut, which looked him it was made form a dagger on her cheek. Owen noticed something on the front of her wrist, it was a black half moon, with a spider in the middle of it, Owen then looked at her ankle, and the same simple was there too only bigger.
“She’s been branded” A warrior said also looking at the simple
“For what?” Owen asked not recognizing the simple
“I know her” an old man huddled over the young girl, “She used to work in the castle at Helm, she was very close to the kings son until the kingdom was invaded and she revealed her self as a trader. She killed the king’s daughter Lewa, and rod back to Mignon’s castle as a hero.” Owen was surprised,
“What does the simple mean?” he asked
“It means to keep you eye out for this one, she likes to trade”
“So she didn’t just turn on the king?”
“Yes, she turned on every one”
“So, do we leave her hear to die?”
“Of course not!” the old man scolded Owen “Bandage her up, I’m sure the Helm counsel will want to have a word with her” Owen and the other warrior bandaged the girl and laid her against a tall oak tree.    


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Comments:

so uh you gonna continue this :p sounds promising

Posted: Dec 25, 2007

Author Comment:

ya, trying to, lol i have so many storys some seem to get forgotten adn blown away but i'm getting back to this one



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