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Faeries of Delusia

Novel By: xStephStephx09
Fantasy


Jamie is a normal sixteen year old girl who blames herself every day for her father leaving her, her mother, and her younger brother alone in the world. After mourning the loss of her church that was torn down, Jamie notices a sudden change in her town; it's quiet everywhere. Suddenly, after nearly being blinded, a girl appears who calls herself Trista. Trista talks of an otherworldy place where she lives, and the evil Lunar Faeries who are after her and other Solar Faeries like her. She pleads Jamie to help her, and then takes her to the land of Delusia. Jamie abruptly finds herself twisted in the lives of the Faeries and other mythical creatures that live there and find that fantasy really does exist. But when gets caught in the line of fire of the Lunar Prince, her life is at stake. And will she ever be able to return home? View table of contents...

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Submitted: May 20, 2008    Reads: 345    Comments: 40    Likes: 8   


***Note: People have asked me to divide this into short sections and I know I should have but I didn't. It's too late for me now I already have a bunch of chapters up I will remember to divide a long chapter in sections for a future reference though so please do not comment me telling me it is a bit too long because I already know that =] thanks***

*~FAERIES OF DELUSIA~*

By xStephStephx09

“Never trust a faerie,

Bet ya heard it once before
The wrath of their becoming
As they raid the forest floor
Don’t give them your belongings
If you’d keep your values sake
Don’t trust them with your life
Because a promise they will break
Ignore the sorry helpless tales
Drown out the bitter cries
For if you would let them prevail
You’d find a faerie in disguise.”
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Some say my life’s just beginning. Yeah, the beginning of the end.
My pastor always used to tell us kids, (Well, if you consider kids ages fourteen to eighteen) that we have our whole lives ahead of us, and to be faithful and worship the Lord. That was, until our Presbyterian church burnt down due to a prank that didn’t turn up oh too funny to a few kids I knew. (Who are now in juvenile hall for the time being.)
I took a good look at the empty, burnt lot where my church used to be. The construction company decided to just tear the rest down and start new, since it was too burned to repair. The repairs would have cost more than tearing it all down and rebuilding. The wind blew cold against my face, nothing new in this town, especially now that it’s October.
Halloween will be here soon. It used to be my favorite holiday, until I claimed it too childish. I don’t even bother to celebrate it anymore. Some of my friends still have a little party or something, but I don’t get involved with that.
My parents never liked Halloween anyway because they believed it was the Devil’s holiday. I don’t exactly believe in the Devil. Most people find that hard to believe since I go to church and all. (Well, used to.) I believe in God and all, but the Devil, I think he’s just a crazed up myth like Sasquatch or the Lochness Monster. Of course not many people know that accept for a few close friends, my best friends. I’m not too open with my beliefs, I wouldn’t want to start any debates.
Besides that, Sunday was boring. I have school tomorrow, but I probably won’t go, because I’m not feeling myself. Probably a cold, I assume. I’ve only missed a few days of school so far, so I’m sure my mom will give me a break. Sometimes I underestimate her, though.
In every fight, there is a loser. I felt obliged to be the loser. I lost to my school, though who doesn’t anyway? And I mean lost, as in, not many people there accept me for who I am, for who anyone is. Too many judgments are made in a day at that school, it’s a failure to society. If I could quit, I would.
Maybe not. I want an education, I want to go to college. I just wish we would move or something so I could get away from this school.
A lot of things were running through my mind. I had a lot of stress. A failed a biology exam on Friday, which isn’t often for me, and doesn’t benefit me if I plan on going out with friends on the weekend. I only have a 78% in that class now, which isn’t failing.
Also, my best friend Katie is acting awfully strange, I can’t put my finger on it. I was at her house a few weeks ago when she first began to act strange, and I didn’t see any signs of alcohol or anything that could be messing with her brain.
I hadn’t approached her about it yet, I don’t want to offend her. Maybe she’s having family problems that she doesn’t want to talk about. Why wouldn’t she tell me though? I’m her best friend, supposedly.
I squirmed in my jacket. The sudden burst of breezes chilled me. I shoved my hands deep in the pockets of my jacket. It was time to go home. I walked the five blocks to my house.
“Have a nice walk?” my little brother, Brian, nagged as I shut the front door behind me.
I ignored him like I usually did and turned straight for the stairs to go to my bedroom. My mom realized I was home and called for me before I hopped up the stairs.
“I assume you were at the library studying for your make up test in biology?” She patted a rolling pin in her hand.
“What are you making?” I asked, changing the subject, but sounding uninterested.
“Bread. Answer my question.”
“You’re making bread the old fashioned way?”
“Jamie!”
“No, Mom. The library is closed today.” I began my way up the stairs. She followed after me.
“Then I hope you have your books up there to start taking notes to study.”
I spun around abruptly. “NO Mom, I’m not. I’m not studying. I failed one test ever and you get on my nerves about it. Leave me alone.” With that, I jogged the rest of the way to my room and slammed the door behind me. I listened for my mom’s eager footsteps approaching the door to scream at me, but I couldn’t hear a sound.
My mom is a good mom, sometimes. She gives us food and raises us right, I guess. Without my father I guess it would be hard, so I give her some slack once in awhile. She doesn’t spoil us because she can’t financially, but I don’t ask for much. She has a lot of time on her hands when she’s at home and she loves to bake, which I’m grateful for. I mean, she made bread from scratch, what kind of mother does , or even has time, to do that for her kids? I do love her homemade bread, though.
Most of the time she gets on my nerves when she nags me to do things I strictly don’t want to do. I don’t ask for much, so why does she expect so much? Usually I’ll hide out in my room until her little phase is over, but usually that doesn’t work. She doesn’t forget things quickly.
I get good grades a lot of the time, and when I get a bad grade, which is rare, she gets all over me about it. Why can’t she just accept I tried my hardest and gave it my all but still failed? I obviously don’t blow off studying, I do it right in front of her at the kitchen table every night if I have to study. I do my homework too. She honestly has nothing to complain about when it comes to school for me. My brother, on the other hand, could use a talking to, but I won’t bring him into this. Sometimes I feel my mom simply complains about whatever is handed to her because she is so angry and rebellious against my dad for leaving us. That isn’t my fault, I begged him to stay. He told me he just wasn’t in love with Mom anymore, and I had nothing to do with it.
Well obviously I did because he hasn’t contacted me since. What a great father.
Today wasn’t quite the greatest day of my life. It was one of those days where I had a lot of time to think. A lot of time to think about things I didn’t want to, like my parents. Of course failing a test didn’t put the cherry on the sundae either.
I blame my mood on the weather usually. Today is dark, due to the clouds and the fogginess of the evening. I found myself sighing a lot, not knowing what to do with myself.
Maybe I needed to take another walk.
I rushed down the stairs, trying not to attract attention to myself as I departed. Of course, since my mother has superior hearing, my conclusion, she caught me before I closed the door.
“Aren’t you hungry at all?” she asked, dusting off flour from her apron.
All I really wanted was bread. Without a word I brushed past her into the kitchen and saw the bread baking in the oven. “I’ll have that when it’s done. I’m going for a walk.”
I saw my mom shake her head as I walked past her and out the door.
Sometimes all she wanted to do was bond with me, or at least talk to me, but I wasn’t a talkative person, especially with her. We just didn’t have a lot of things in common. I concluded that if she were my age, we probably wouldn’t be friends. I didn’t tell her that, for her feelings sake.
To release the bottled up energy I realized I had, I jogged back down the street of where my church used to be. I took in the sight of destruction and it made me sad. I wanted to be in church again. To sing of the Lord and be with my church family.
I shrugged and dug my hands into my pocket. It was a chilly day, obviously.
I took a stroll around a few blocks and noticed something peculiar. No one was in sight.
I looked up and down the rows of houses. All I could see was fog. I was standing at an intersection and I peered down all four lanes. I saw no cars nor heard them. I looked at a few houses and saw practically no signs of life. No children laughing, people chatting, not even the faint sound of a TV.
This was definitely odd, especially for this town, where commotion was always common.
As I was examining my surroundings, I finally heard a faint whisper rush through the air around me. It was so soft I had to strain to hear anything. It sounded as if someone were yelping “Help! Help me!” I couldn’t be sure.
I listened intently and spun around for a sign of any living creature.

Nothing.

I really double guessed my sanity when I thought I heard my name being called. It sounded distant, and yet so close. I couldn’t put my finger on it . . .
A sudden wave of glittery light flustered my vision and I felt I would fall over any second. It was like a strobe light was flashing in my face. I turned and spun, trying to restore my vision.
Suddenly, as the light seemed to die down, a girl was a few feet away from me. I screamed suddenly, because just previously the town was empty. She wore worn out clothes; a neutral colored skirt and shirt torn at the sleeves. I looked down and realized she wore no shoes. Her face was dirty and she was panting in exhaustion.
“Help me.” she pleaded, running up to me.
“Who are you?” I gasped.
“They’re after me!” she interrupted.
“They?” She need to be more specific, I was clueless so far.
“The Lunar Faeries!”
I almost laughed. Faeries? How ridiculous. “Excuse me? What in the world are you talking about?”

“My name is Trista.” she began to explain. “I’m from Delusia. I ran because they were after me! They were gonna capture me! The only way out was to come to earth but they followed me. They’re gonna destroy everything if they don’t find me! We gotta hide! You need to help me!”

Soaking up this new information, and not quite believing it, I stayed silent, wondering if she had escaped from an insane asylum or if she was being dead serious.
“You have to believe me, Jamie!”
I was taken aback. Ignoring the other nonsense she had babbled about, I asked in frustration and fear, “How do you know my name?!”
“You’re name—uh,” she peered over her shoulder. “No time for that! Follow me!” It was more a demand that anything. She grasped my wrist and tugged me behind her. She was surprisingly fast, and I was surprisingly slow, and I even ran track.
“Wha—slow down! What the heck?”
“Shhhhh.” She held her index finger over her lips as she ran, peering back at me.
I was normally stubborn toward my mom, so I don’t know what made me listen to this girl. I stayed quiet, but I was NOT calm. She was almost scaring me. I was almost in fear for my life. Who was chasing us? I couldn’t hear or see anyone!
“Are you just imagining this?” I whispered to Trista.
She halted me abruptly and I almost fell forward on my face. “I am not crazy. I’ve already heard enough of that. Just listen to me. If you don’t believe me, I’ll show you.”
“Uh, show me what?” I was skeptic.
“Delusia.”
I wanted to laugh out, I wanted to ask questions, I wanted to shout, “NO! Where are you gonna take me?!” But for some reason, I wasn’t scared. I was overly curious.
I shrugged. “Okay, show me.”
Trista smiled, almost victoriously. “Okay, hold your breath and close your eyes.”


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Comments:

i like it:} update soon:] and if you cant get any more ch to show up or go on it try and turn it into a novle.

Posted: May 20, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks and oh ok

I love it! (Take that Rat!) The poem at the beginning was enough to capture my attention, and the story so far has provided. Really would love to read more.

Posted: May 20, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm so glad you like it, and yeah I acutally like that little poem too hehe. I'll be updating soon I love when people read my stuff thanks so much!

I like it ^^ a lot
cant wait to read more, so please update soon =)

~mandy

Posted: May 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much I will!!

Oo this is interesting..I like it.Update soon i'm curious about what'll happen :)

Posted: May 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks I'm almost done with chapter two, I'm writing a lot of things at once that's why it's taking so long thanks for your patience!

Stephs Biggest Fan=)
(not registered user)

This was amazing..update i want to read more. I like the way the church and the church-going is like family to Jamie and while she is in church she feels as though her family hasn't split up and it like the good ol' days. Very nice and Very good keep it up.

Posted: Jun 6, 2008

Author Comment:

awe thanks i promise to update as soon as i finish chapter two!

Kyoshi14
(not registered user)

Ahh Steph! I missed your writing this was amazingly good... you need to tell me when you update ok? =P Keep it up Steph love ya. =]

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Awe Dana thanks i'm glad you liked it. yeah you haven't read my stuff in forever i missed when you would read everything of mine and deal with my nonsense of creating new stories every day. but you would still edit them and give me ur opinions! thanks!

Love it, 'specially the poem.^-^

Posted: Jun 17, 2008

Author Comment:

thank ya =]

I love it! How many chapters are there going to be? I want to read more!

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

haha five so far... =]

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks you should read the rest! =]

I would just like to say amazing for just being chapter one!!!!!!!

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

=] thank you, thank you very much.

haha, something makes me think Jaimie's going to regret saying that

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

if you read more you will surely find out ;) thx for reading this!

i like this. [:

off to read more!

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you!

Super! It must have been hard for Jamie, after her father left her, her mom, and her brother all alone!

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

yeahhh lol thx for reading =]

I loved it!! Can't wait to read more.

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Awesome! Go ahead there are seven chapters so far! =] thx for reading

i must say, i gotta read more of this!!
Very brilliant!!

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you im glad u read this thx for commenting!

i really like this. it's very creative! You've definately got me hooked, I'll keep reading!

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

im glad u like it thank you =]

woah. that was really good, it really grabbed my attention and kept it there. it was really really good, i liked it alot... did you write more? if you haven't i think you should. its good.

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes there are seven chapters so far. Thanks for reading!! =]

Hi, I liked the opening for this chapter, the narrator comes across strongly and that first line is one of the best I've read in a short story lately.

You should probably consider slicing this chapter up into smaller pieces, though, because it makes it easier to read short online (personally looking at the computer too long hurts my eyes) I will be back to check out the rest of it when I get the chance though.

ps I'm open for comments on my novel in progress, too!

Sohoroses.

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

yeah i type and don't notice how long it is but it would be too much work to cut it down caz i already have 7 chapters on here but ill remember that for a future reference. thanks for commenting im really glad you liked it! enjoy the rest =]

Divide it into shorter versions. this is like a professional writing. Did you ever try to publish this? you must

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

sorry can't but thank you for the compliment im happy you like it =]

I really like this. I can relate to it, somehow.

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

i am glad to hear that! lol thank you for reading and commenting hope to hear more from you soon =]

I'm impressed, and I don't see why you should divide it into short sections, the piece of work u have was great enough. I look forward into reading more about Jamie and Trista

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Ohh well I'm glad you liked it thank you and I can't wait to hear more opinions from you on this novel! =]

I love it!I can relate to it, somehow

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

glad you like it!

HAHA gahhh steph its too long.... just messing with you ehhh I really liked it keep it up !!

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

hah oh well thanks =P

i like it so far. its a great start. i really wish i had time to read more, but i dont. i promise ill read more tomorrow, though. but, back to what i was saying about the book, good job so far. im looking forward to reading more! =)

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you very much i appreciate it =D

I LOVE THIS! ...But, because of time i'll put it on my reading list kay?

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

That's fine thanks for reading! =]

I absolutely loved it!!!!...waiting to read more.

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

well 8 chapters are already up almost done with nine! thx =]

the poem was a fantastic way to start things! ive just read the first chap and i liked it... gonna read the 9 others soon!

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you!

im not much for fantasy but i rather enjoyed this!

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you i hope you read more! =]

Hey, I like this. Read my novel I am starting. It has 2 chapters so far, but I have been a member since yesterday. (Which I am sure you already know;])

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

i don't have time to read novels right now but thx for reading this!

I found it interesting, it caught my attention. Off to read more.

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

thank u

supranjopari
(not registered user)

Nice...really nice....really really nice.

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks thanks

That was great! I love it so far. I am certainly going to add it to my reading list. Great job!

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

Author Comment:

hah thank u! im glad

I really like this. The way the girl thinks is very realistic. Keep up the good work!

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thank u very much. :) i will try!

hey ~
where did you get that quote in the beginning from ?

Posted: Jul 23, 2008

Author Comment:

I made it up myself, why?

I've gotta say I like this!
-nodnod-
I'll try to check out the other chapters when I get a chance, but I'm super-busy right now. This is pretty good so far, though.

Posted: Jul 24, 2008

Author Comment:

thank u and yes i would love for u to check them out! thanks again.

Usually I don't care for fantasy, but this is my kind of story! Love it, keep it up, and I will definitely continue to read the next chapters! =)

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

ohh well whether or not u like fantasy, i have a feeling you will be into this, idk why, lol. well i hope u continue to read this. thanks for commenting! :)

awesome, i am extremely interested now. ^_^

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

thank u im glad :)

i like this

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

im glad :)

This is fantastic!!! ^^,

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

thank u!

indiefreak
(not registered user)

fantastic beginning:D took me long to read this, sorry... but i love every part of it. i haven't read anything about fairies for such a long time now, and they're one of my fav creatures:) *off to read more*

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

thank u very much it's okay if it took awhile, i understand! hope to hear more from u soon! :D



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