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Dragons World

Novel By: xxstuckinfantesyxx
Fantasy


Shadow is an outcast of his clan, Winged Fury. The clans leader Ignites declares war against another clan, Golden Armor. Shadow however dose not agree, and gose to take action, but gets exiled. How will he save Winged Fury? There fate lays in his paws... View table of contents...

Chapters:

1 2 3

Submitted: Aug 25, 2008    Reads: 60    Comments: 7    Likes: 2   


Chapter 1- A Rough Start

On a misty night two dragon clans rest peacefully in there territories. The clans were Winged Furry and Golden Armor. There leaders were tough and wise. “Silence everyone!” a raspy voice sounded from a high platform. The 4 dragons in Winged Furry looked up at there leader, Igneous. He was a powerful dragon. His scales shinned red, his two horns were smooth as rested behind his head. His teeth and claws were as sharp as daggers. He was fierce.

“Tomorrow is a big day for us!” he said with a hiss.” At dawn we shall attack Golden Armor!” he held his head up proud. All the dragons roared and stomped there paws in agreement, except one. He stood behind the rest, glaring at ignites with his ice blue eyes. He was a deep midnight black. His claws and teeth were blue. He snorted. He was an outcast. He stepped forward.” I disagree Ignites!” He shouted. Ignites shpt a glance at him. “This is wrong! We are in peace now, lets keep it that way...” Shadow said. “PEACE?!” Ignites bellowed. “We should CRUSH Golden Armor and win there

land!” Ignites took a step closer. ”Now don’t question me…Shadow.” “We attack tomorrow!” Ignites quickly said. Then he turned around and walked into a small cave opening. The dragons all talked, leaving Shadow out. He started staring at them. They were returning glances. Shadow tilted his head to try to pick up what they were talking about.

He heard a bunch of whispers then heard his name. A muscle twisted in his stomach, urging him to growl. He started to. The dragons didn’t look surprised. He glared at them and softly growled. He heard one of them growl. He hissed and walked up to them.

A dark green dragon stepped up. “Get away from us…freak.” Some of the dragons laughed. That just set off the fuse. Shadow slowly raised his tail, ready to fight. He gave the dragon a challenging growl. He growled back and got into a fighting position. The green dragon raised his paw and swept Shadow across the face. Shadow yelped. His cheek stung. Shadow shook it off. He crouched down and lunged forward grabbing the dragons shoulders and pushing him down. He roared loudly.

Ignites thundered out of his cave, “WHATS GOING ON!” He roared. The green dragon yelped, attracting Ignites to look towards him. His fiery red eyes stared Shadow down. “You…” he mumbled. He marched to Shadow. He curled his lip and in a flash, swept Shadow off his feet with his tail. Ignites rested his huge paw on Shadows tail. “I want you out of here.” He grumbled. “I declare exile!” he shouted.

Shadows stomach twisted in fear. He quickly arose, looking up to Ignites, stunned. “I want you out…NOW!” he yelled as he pointed his snout towards the entrance of there cave. Shadow bowed his head in response and slowly walked away. He took one last look. The Green Dragon was grinning. Shadow flicked his tail at him. He spread his big majestic wings and dove off the cliff were his home for years laid. He beated his wings and gained altitude. He sighed and let the wind carry him away.


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Comments:

You must come read mine. you have good writing and I enjoyed it. I will read more as you publish.

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks (:

Well it is a creative idea for a novel. I like it :)
Keep me posted for new chapters, k?

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Sure will! and thanks (:

I really enjoyed it! I think you're a fine up-and-coming writer. :) If you don't mind, I'll point out some improvements that can be made.

When you use there, you meant their. There is like a place, but their is used to show possession. Like "I live over there" compared to "That is their dog."

Don't always trust Word.

Hope this helps!

Many good thoughts to you,
Javelin

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for the advice! Like I wrote in my profile, im young but learning (:

Hey! This is a good chapter. The story-line seems to be a good one! Keep me posted! Thanks!

~angelgirl

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks a bunch, and i most deffinatly will.

Awesomeness i love it off to the next chapter

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks a bundle! :)

Great Work! I am off to read the next chapter!

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

okay, thanks for reading!

This really isn't my style, but I'm willing to give it a try.

Posted: Aug 30, 2008

Author Comment:

yea, like i said, some people may not enjoy it. Im a fantasy / dragon freak :)
but thanks for "giving it a try "
you dont have to read it if you dont want to.



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