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Hidden Secrets In Our World

Novel By: XxXxSamanthaxXxX
Fantasy


Tags: vampire, love, hot, guys

(i cant think of a good title so this is gona have to do if u can think of one tell me lol)
Jesse is a 17 year old girl who is thrown into a world of immortals and she falls for lord Haydien but along the way a new student comes to Mr. Heathrow’s house (castle) and makes trouble for them what will happen only I know lol
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Submitted: Oct 5, 2008    Reads: 170    Comments: 10    Likes: 0   


Haydien and I laid there him just holding me against him ….I felt safe and I wanted to stay like this forever… I turned a bit so I could see Haydien’s face ….it was still troubled, I took his hand that was on my stomach into my hand.

“Haydien what is wrong” I asked pleading like

And then he smiled ….. He smiled….I cocked and eyebrow

“Nothing is particularly wrong I just don’t want to get up”

“Why do you have to get up” I said almost panic like and I held onto him tighter

“I have to go and fe” he stopped short of what he was gonna say “don’t worry I will go when you are asleep I would not miss this for the world” and he took his hand out from mine then so softly dragged his fingers from my shoulder to my hip ….I shuddered slightly then he put his hand back with and pulled me even closer. I sat there thinking about everything every comment every moment I had with my mom …the last word I said to her , a tear rolled down my cheek and Haydien sighed heavily

“Jesse I am” but he did not finish he just held me and I knew he was listening to my thoughts and seeing me and my mom happy together and seeing all the fights and all the love, and then my thoughts stopped on her face as she smiled at me and I closed my eyes and fell asleep seeing my mom’s face.

I woke up to cold fingers tracing my face

“Haydien” I said sleepily

“Not quite”

I jumped at the voice it was not unrecognizable but that voice should not be here

“Jason”

“Yup” and I felt him get off the bed and

“What are you doing here”   I said once again half asleep

“Well I came here to talk to Haydien but I can see he is not here”

“Why do you need to talk to Haydien?”

“Because he has something that I want”

“What does he have that you want” I said trying to find to why he really was here

He walked over to me again and knelt down to me

“I want” he paused and put his cold hand on my shoulder

“You”

I looked at him like …I don’t know how I was looking at him but he laughed slightly

There was a huge crashing noise and then another one then another one and then nothing.

“I don’t think he is very happy that I am here”

And then Haydien burst into the bedroom his eyes were completely black and he was advancing quickly on Jason.

“I told you to stay away from her did I not” Jason hissed at Haydien

“Get away from her”

“I warned you didn’t I and what do you do you get busy with her tsk tsk tsk” Jason said

I grabbed my clothes off the floor beside the bed and put them on quickly as Jason and Haydien were staring each other down.

And then Haydien glanced at me and that was it Jason had his sword out and swung at Haydien

“Haydien” I screamed and he jumped out of the way and pulled his sword out…where was he hiding that

Jason and Haydien fought and soon left the room and I followed them outside but I was snagged by …..Demetry his arm was tight around my waist and I had no way to get free unless I fought him and the last time I did it did not turn out so good. I brought my foot up behind me and kicked him right where it hurts the grip loosened and I pulled away he grabbed my wrist and pulled me into him but not before I swung my fist and got him right in the face I heard a crunching sound and Demetry let me go, as his head was down and he was blubbering about his nose I kicked my leg up and he went flying backward and fell on the ground on his high back, Demetry got up and all I saw was fist flying at me and it connected with my jaw and I fell to the ground I tasted blood and it dripped down my chin, I glanced over at Haydien him and Jason were still going at it and Haydien looked hurt, but my attention was soon brought back to my fight when a hard kick went to my chest I heard the snap and then there was pain and lots of it my chest was on fire and it felt like I was being stabbed it became harder to breath but I had to finish this so I stood up and attacked Demetry I was then shoved up against the cottage and something dug into my arm and then I felt my blood drip down my arm and then his hands were around my neck cutting my air off completely I reached my hands above my head and felt a sharp object I pulled on it and it came free I brought my arm down and the object connected with Demetry’s collar bone he yelled in pain and let me go I fell to the ground and breathed in as much air as I could, I looked up to see Demetry and a large chunk of wood sticking out of him and he was yelling bloody murder

“You bitch” he yelled

I grabbed the axe I suddenly found …where did I get it I had no idea….

And I threw it at him and then there was no more yelling and he fell to his knees, I looked up at Jason and Haydien’s fight and it was not good Haydien was on the ground and he was crawling away from Jason who was walking at him with his sword at Haydien and he kicked Haydien and then again and then again I felt the tears in my eyes but then it was anger, Haydien was on his back and Jason had his sword to his neck……

Haydien’s POV

“Do you see my all mighty lord that I win I always win”

Jason’s blade was at my neck and I could not move I did not feed before Jason and his cohorts showed up.

 Jason raised his word and smiled at me.

“I win”

And he brought his sword down I closed my eyes and just waited then I heard it the sound of metal going into flesh but not my flesh I opened my eyes to see Jason’s sword right through jesses stomach.

“Well I was not expecting that but it will work” Jason said and almost laughed as his sword was in Jesse

Jesse fell to the ground and was not moving I grabbed my sword and plunged it into Jason

“you missed” Jason said as he pulled the sword out of his chest and then he disappeared…how did he do that, I had no time to think Jesse was down and she was hurt badly, I inched closer to her and I could not hear her heart…..this is bad this is very bad I need to get her to Heathrow’s. I turned Jesse over and the blood was everywhere her shirt was soaked and the smell flooded me and I wanted her blood I wanted it I wanted to taste it n my tongue …..No I could not feed on her. I pulled the sword out and the smallest whimper came from her lips

“Jesse can you hear me”

“Jesse you can make this hold on”

I picked her lifeless body up and started to run.

okay so tell me how u like it and yada yada lol

okay umm so far this is the only chapter i listened to music and it was... and it is a very randome song to listen to while writeing lol

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    Comments:

    Oh..My..GOD! Jesse she'll make it won't she? *sniffles* Haydien is soo brave!
    Update soon!
    Would you check out my new story Twenty-One and Preview of Lincoln Heights please?
    Thanks!

    Posted: Oct 5, 2008

    Author Comment:

    Haydien is braze lol and ya i will check it out

    Wow Samantha. That is awesome. Since I know you can't continue your story without your main character. It is very hopeful that she will pull through (I hope). Very good suspense in this and I love what you have done with it.

    Posted: Oct 6, 2008

    Author Comment:

    ur a smart cookie lol thank you for your comment i should be updateing soon

    OMFG i love it what is going to happen?? update soon plez:]

    Posted: Oct 6, 2008

    Author Comment:

    i will update soon i swear lol but the chapter was getting long and ya so i had to cut it off lol

    OMG! WOW!! WOW OH WOW OH WOW!!! Big twist there. WOW! Hmm...what other word to use...oh yea...WOW!!

    Posted: Oct 6, 2008

    Author Comment:

    thats alot of WOWs lol i am glad ya liked it i will update soon

    are you effen serious???? arghhh JESSE you nonge...i loved it...wow...what a jerk..i thought he wanted her....not wanted to kill her????/
    please update soonnnnnn!!!!fsjdgc vgsxc

    Posted: Oct 6, 2008

    Author Comment:

    lol yes he did want her but i think he gave up and just didnt care .......im glad u liked it lol lol i will update soon

    WOWZERS!!!!!!!!!! THAT IS DEFINITLY LOVE...she saved him...now he is saving her....

    +Hecate+

    Posted: Oct 6, 2008

    Author Comment:

    yes it is DEFINITLY LOVE ..... im glad ya liked it

    OOOO CAN'T WAIT FOT THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!! BUT I AM SENCING THAT MAYBE JESSE ISN'T AS HUMAN AS EVERYONE THINKS, SHE HAS SPECIAL BLOOD RIGHT? I READ THAT IT SOME CHAPTER!!! I HOPE SHE IS SOME SUPER COOL IMPORTANT PERSON!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT REALLY HAPPENS!!!!!

    Posted: Oct 7, 2008

    Author Comment:

    hehe ...ur givin away the story lol .....ill update soon

    OH MY GOSH!! NO FRICKIN' WAY!! AHHH!!!! WOW, I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!! =D

    Posted: Oct 7, 2008

    Author Comment:

    lol i just updated my other novel so i should be updatein this one soon

    ....oh no.. OK Haydien...be her Mighty Mouse...

    Posted: Oct 8, 2008

    Author Comment:

    lol

    ooohhh noooo ihate jason i want jesse to live

    Posted: Oct 12, 2008

    Author Comment:

    lol i know jason needs to die ...lol



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