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Hidden Secrets In Our World

Novel By: XxXxSamanthaxXxX
Fantasy


Tags: vampire, love, hot, guys

(i cant think of a good title so this is gona have to do if u can think of one tell me lol)
Jesse is a 17 year old girl who is thrown into a world of immortals and she falls for lord Haydien but along the way a new student comes to Mr. Heathrow’s house (castle) and makes trouble for them what will happen only I know lol
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Submitted: Oct 12, 2008    Reads: 97    Comments: 5    Likes: 0   


Haydiens POV

I ran as fast as I could but each second Jesse became colder and colder and I could barely hear her heart beat ....she’s not going to make it.....yes she is she has to make it.....  My shirt was soaked in her blood and I wished I had fed earlier because her blood was so sweet smelling and I wanted it I wanted the rest ......Jesus man pull it together.

I burst through the front doors to Heathrow’s house.

“HELP” I yelled

Heathrow was there right always followed by all of his students.

“All of you get back to your rooms – Lilly Derek Gavin and James you stay here we might need some help” Heathrow said

“What did you do to her” Lilly screeched

“Enough Lilly” Heathrow said

“Jason came and there was a fight she saved my life” I said on the brink of tears

“Okay follow me – Lilly get all the healing potions and anything that you got to help and hurry” Heathrow instructed

I laid Jesse down on a medical table in the room Heathrow brought me to ....she looked awful her lips were blue and her skin was chalk white.

“We need to stop the bleeding so Haydien apply pressure to the wound Derek can you hold onto her ...Derek”

“Umm I have to go ....the blood” Derek left without another word

“Okay James can you hold her still so I can help her drink the potions Lilly is bringing ....LILLY” Heathrow said but yelled the last part

“I applied pressure to the opening in jesses stomach and the one on her back blood poured out and onto my fingers I could feel the thirst building ....keep it together...

Lilly came into the room with about 15 bottles of potions

“This is all I could find it should be enough but I'm not sure” Lilly started to cry and Gavin was at her side in a second

“We have sit her up because if we just pour this into her mouth she will drowned in it” Heathrow said

I sat Jesse up and more blood dripped down and across my hand the little bottle of blue stuff was placed at jesses lips and was poured into her mouth but all it did was come out the corners of her mouth.

“She can’t swallow she’s to far gone” Heathrow said

“What that’s it we just let her die” I said

“Wait I could try to heal her I know my fallen angel powers are not as strong as they should be by now but I think I can heal her” James explained

“It’s worth a shot” Heathrow said

Lilly was crying harder and Gavin was trying to comfort her the best he could but he was not doing a very good job she was still crying and sobbing

“Haydien if Jesse does not pull throw please remove yourself from my house if you are going to lose it I don’t want any of my students hurt”

I nodded and looked back to Jesse, James was beside her and had her hand in his and his eyes were closed there was a bright glow in between his hands and then nothing Jesse just took a deep breath and James let go of her hand

“She should be okay but she will be out of it for a few days and she is going to have to have a healing potion now that she can swallow” James said

I took Jesse into my arms and held her and that’s when I knew I had to protect her no matter what and she was mine and no one else and I had to keep her safe.

Jesses POV

I woke up and I was really sore I tried to sit up but the searing pain in my stomach stopped me.

“Jesse are you awake”

I looked over to see Haydien sitting in the chair beside where I was laying

“Haydien I'm sorry I.....” I trailed off when I saw Haydiens face ...he looked like I was committing a crime

“Jesse you did nothing wrong – the only thing you did was almost take you away from me- I can’t live without you – I will be here for you for as long as you want me” (ya I know it sounds a lot like twilight sorry)

That’s when tears started to roll down my cheeks, Haydien was at my side and had me in his arms I buried my face into his shoulder and just let him hold me.

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I have been bed ridden for a week now and I am going crazy but I was finally allowed back into my room

Haydien has been very quiet for the last couple of days he talked to Heathrow and then from then on he has been almost distant from me hmmm I wonder what is wrong.

Later

“Jesse we need to talk” Haydien said

“Okay”

“I talked to Heathrow about me and you and...” he trailed off

“Haydien tell me please”

“I ...we...the...we....I have to go back to my realm before next week and ... it’s a vampire realm and I was wondering if ...you ...could or would come with me”

“Of course I will is that why you are so upset?”

“Umm Jesse I may be lord there but I'm not sure how the vampires there will react with a human there”

“Don’t worry I will protect you against them” I said jokingly

“Funny Jesse” he smiled a bit

“Okay so what is on the agenda for tomorrow” Haydien asked ...apparently that conversation was over

“I don’t know” I sat up and walked over to him

“You’re not supposed be out of bed yet”

“Ya well I am out of bed and I feel fine” I lied a bit my stomach did hurt but I was not going to tell Haydien that

“I don’t believe you” but he stepped closer to me

“Remember when the first time you were in my room”

“Haha ya and you thought you could beat me up”

“Hah I can you just don’t know it”

“Mhmm I'm sure you could”

“Oh I can you just wait”

“Okay Rambo”

I made a face at him and apparently it was funny because he burst out laughing

“So why were you so worried about me going to your realm?”

“You don’t give up do you?”

“Nope”

“Okay well you see Heathrow said that if we were married things would work out better in my realm”

“What’s your realms name?”

“Hielanna”

“Well do you want to be married to me?” I asked while looking down at the ground

okay ppl im sorry that it is so short but i have a reason for that....who thinks that jesse should become a vampire before haydien brings her to his realm or should she stay human....i have an idea for both plans i just dont know what one to pick so i would love your help.....


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Comments:

ok they just confesed they love eachother and now they are getting hiched?? i just think it is going a little too fast but it is your story and it is really good i still love it update soon plez:]

Posted: Oct 12, 2008

Author Comment:

ya things are going way to fast ..and all that will be in the next chapter ...DUN DUN DUH lol lol

auwww i thought it was cute...but yeah only that one line about you taking yourself away from me was the only thing that kind of was similar to Twilight...but other than that great chapter...update sooon...i hope the next chapter she will be...a you know what!!!

Posted: Oct 12, 2008

Author Comment:

ya it was alot like twilight lol lol anyhoo so far most of you guys want her to be a vampire so i think i am gonna go with that idea

Wow, that part was a lot like Twilight! Anyways, I thought about Jesse at then end, how she wasn't looking him in the eyes. I don't think it's what she wants, at least not yet. It was a good chapter, things are moving a bit fast, but that happens to me too. You kept us waiting awhile for this chapter! And please update soon!

Posted: Oct 13, 2008

Author Comment:

kk will do ya i am sorry that was so much like Twilight i try so hard not to do that. ya things are moving really fast and thats all gonna be in the next chapter.
thanks
**Sam**

Vamp first then go to realm--but----

if the human idea gets her married to him quicker---

then the human first then realm idea.

GREAT CHAPTER! +Hecate+

Posted: Oct 13, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks and ya i have so mant ideas its hard to just pick one

Wow Samantha. It is great. I do agree that it is moving a bit fast, but who knows there might be a reason for it. It is hard right now to make any love line sound like anything but twilight, so even though it does Kudos to you for a good chapter. I honestly don't mind if she is human or vampire. It is your story and you are doing a wonderful job with it.

Posted: Oct 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you and ya it is really hard to say stuff that does not sound like twilight lol .....thank you so much i always love your comments...... ya i think i am going to make jesse a vampire but i have to do some other stuff first.



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