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Hidden Secrets In Our World

Novel By: XxXxSamanthaxXxX
Fantasy


Tags: vampire, love, hot, guys

(i cant think of a good title so this is gona have to do if u can think of one tell me lol)
Jesse is a 17 year old girl who is thrown into a world of immortals and she falls for lord Haydien but along the way a new student comes to Mr. Heathrow’s house (castle) and makes trouble for them what will happen only I know lol
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Submitted: Sep 10, 2008    Reads: 220    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


James Derek and Gavin all burst into a roar of laughter.

Lily and I were just looking at each other with a uh oh look,

“well well what do we have here ..........Llily is that you.....who’s with you” Haydien said

“umm hey Haydien ...it’s been a long time.....umm this is Jesse” lily said

Lillypushed me towards Haydien which I intern slipped and fell almost landing on my butt but I was being held up by.....Haydien

“you okay”

“ya ...I’m fine”

he set me back on my feet and turned back to Lily

“so what have you been up to ...the last time I saw you were still having some problems”

“ha ha ya the last time I saw you ...... I was a mess”

“nah you were just having a tuff time”

“hey guys how are things”

was the last thing I heard before Lilly dragged me into the elevator

“what was all that about” I asked really confused

“well you see... when I first realized I could ...shoot lightning out of my hands and make positions out of anything......I did not....cope well..... I ran away from home and I started killing innocent people by accident...well Haydien found me and brought me here that was 4 years ago”

”ahh that’s why you did not want to see him"

“ya sorry”

“it’s okay but why did you push me at him “

“ha ha funny story .... I can feel emotions and well...you were liking him and he was ....”

“Hey so what’s up with Haydien coming back “Gavin interrupted

!!!okay i am soooooo sorry that it is this short i ran out of time to put a full chapter up im sooo sorry again i will update again soon hopefully tomorrow but im not sure !!! sorry


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Comments:

It's ok that its so short...but please update soon, and please keep me posted!

+Hecate+

Posted: Sep 13, 2008

Author Comment:

kk will do ...i have to type it up so i am hopein i will do tha soon ....i will keep u posted

hi i am shelby and i really like ur story so far!!!!

Posted: Oct 30, 2008

Author Comment:

thnk you im glad you like it

you might already have recognised me, cuz i read all of your stories and they are ALL good, plus i leave comments every time.I like Hayden, but i would be ever so delighted if you used Damien instead. I LUV that name...lol

I like your story, i'm going to read the whole thing, i'll tell you what i think at the end of each chapter, keep me updated...lol

xxanglxxprnczzxx

Posted: Nov 3, 2008

Author Comment:

i will keep you updated...and thanks i love that u love my storys lol



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