Random First Lines: Through the fire and the flames I reach my hand out toward you. Through the pain and heartache my eyes search... : Romance » Read

Welcome Visitor: Login to the siteJoin the site

Legend of Denthose

Novel By: Zane
Fantasy


The Story about the war between heaven and Hell. A war had been going on for ages and Sir Geldan a renagade Angel and Demonic Kain a Demon are tried of gathering Souls for God and the Devil. So They created a Warrior from there own Powers of Heaven and Hell. They had a destiny for him to grow in a human child then become the warrior that will gather souls for THEM. Sirdemon was his name and he makes his own Destiny. View table of contents...

Chapters:

1 2 3

Submitted: Jun 10, 2007    Reads: 75    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


 

The Legend of Denthoes

Book 1

Sirdemon

 

 

 

By Bryan J. Baysinger

April 10, 2006

 

Dedicated to:

All my friends: J-man D, J-dog H, James L, James S, Andy M, and Jeff S.

 

Special Thanks to,

John D.

For Helping me get through this Creation.

 

 

 

 

 

Rated F for Freaky

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

SIRDEMON

 

 

 

 

 

Chapter 1

Back Story

 

 

 

 

 

 

The man about 18 stood in the middle of the room. He had never killed 22 pepole with a sword, he had never killed anybody. The man looked in the mirror. He uses a bloody hand to wipe the short blond hair out of his dark blue eyes.

"Alex...what have you gotten yourself into?" He asked himself.

He looked at his new shirt he bought yesterday. He ran his hand over the name "Blood Snot" and fingered the hole at the cross thumbs that the mad woman had torn. Alex sheaths the sword on his left hip. He walked through the only door that was not the front door. This room was cleaner no bodies, bo blood, and no guts.

It was a small hallway with three doors. Alex sighed and leaned against the door. A door to hid right open a man came threw it with torn clothes, a gun, and a gun belt.

"Hurry it's coming" The man said and threw the gun to Alex.

The gun was a .45 Winchester it had one bullet. Another man came through the door. This man had an eye missins and no vlosthes on. The first man tried to grab the naked man, but sadly missed. The naked man held the man in his arms and tore into the man's neck like a wolf at dinnertime. The naked man tore a chunck clean out of the other man and led his body fall to the ground when it saw Alex.

The naked man walked toward Alex. Alex just stood there in shock. Alex reached for the sword but could not pull it out from its sheath. The man reached for Alex and griped his arms. Alex spun the gun around in his hand holding the barrel now. Alex broke his right hand free from the man and pistol-whipped the man across the face. Alex's hand went through the man's head like mud.

Alex let the naked man fall to the ground and walked to the other dead man. Alex took the gun belt and put it on and holstered the gun on his right hip. He checked the belt and saw no bullets.

"Only one bullet, better use this on the man who got me stuck in this mess." Alex said. He looked at the last two doors. One sais Store Room the other Confidential on it. "Its always a confidential door." Alex said and walked through the door.

He came into a room filled with large metal containers with locked steel doors and weird tubes going into them. He walked to one and looked into a glass window. In side was a weird beast with horns also Red and brownish skin and a tail. Alex gasped and took a step backward.

"What the heck is that?" Alex asked himself.

There was a clank of meatal and Alex spun around pulling our the sword. There was no one there, but the darkness of the room. Alex sighed and sheathed the sword. There was a loud gasp of air from behind him. He spent around to see the door on the container opening were the monster was. The door swung open and Alex fell backward. The monster just stood there for a moment then the wires and tubes began to snap and brake from the monster's body.

The beast body fell limp, its head only a few inches lightly, it did not move. Alex kicked it lightly, it did not move. Alex begun to laugh. he stops laughing when he heard a metal banging sound. Alex froze when he saw the monster's tail banging against the floor. Alex tried for the sword but he was sitting on it. The beast had begun to move its arms, then the head jerked up. Alex froze staring into the monsters eyes. The beast growled and stood up.

Alex tried to get up but the beast pounced on him. Alex raised his arms and caught the monsters front legs.. The back legs griped Alex's legs. The beast tore at Alex's Throat but Alex moved his head just in time to doge. The beast tore at Alex's head again but there was a loud banging sound of machine gun fire and the beast jumped off of Alex and ran down a long dark path of the meatal containers.

Alex sat up to see something jump down from the railing along the second floor of the room. The figure did a front flip off the rail and landed some where in the dark. Alex stood up hand on his sword. The Figure walked into the light. The figure turned out to be a 17 year old girl with long black hair and green eyes. She had black baggy pants and boots with a black shirt. On her back was a holster with a sniper rifile in it with a high powered scope. There was a holster on her right hip for the AK-47 she held in her hand.

 

Who is this Girl that saved Alex? What was that Beast? Will we find out why Alex is here and what brought him to a strange place?

 

Comeing Soon......

 

Part 2.


0

Email this story Email this story | Print Story Print Story | Add to reading list

Comments:

don't have the time now, but this is a cool start. how many chapters until the end?

(in answer to your question, my work is more on the human condition, love and romance, lust, fear, things like that. apparently its good, but most of my work is up to interpretation. i write in character most of the time)

Posted: Jun 14, 2007

Author Comment:

wow...Thanks for the post...Not many people have commnted...I will read some of yours...You sould read some of my poems.

This is really pretty good. You have a few..well quite a few mistakes. If you want me to tell you them then I will. But im not going to tell you what they are unless you want me to.
Off to read chapter 2 =]

Posted: Jan 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes please tell me



Add Your Comments:

Your Name:

Spam protection control::

© Copyright 2009 Zane All rights reserved. Zane has granted theNextBigWriter, LLC non-exclusive rights to display this work on Booksie.com.

Add to Reading List
Become a fan
Email this story Email this story
Read/Write Reviews Read/Write Reviews
Print Story Print Story



Other writing by Zane Amish Love and Death Cold Life Dark and Stormy Night Soul'Ders: Book 1 Spike. More..



Tags

Love, Poetry, Death, Life, Poem, Romance, Pain, Fantasy, Sad, Hope, Sex, Hate, Horror, God, War, Hurt, Sadness, Loss, Dark, Humor, Fiction, Depression, Heart, Family, Friendship.

About | News | Contact | Your Account | TheNextBigWriter | Advertise

© 2008 TheNextBigWriter, LLC. All Rights Reserved. Terms under which this service is provided to you. Privacy Policy.