Itz a little funny, scary, and entertainig. Like it!!!
(1st 2 comment, yeah!!)

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

i thought it was really good, very creepy. which is a big fat plus

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Remind me never to get you mad..o.o
I actually liked the exclamation marks which is weird since usually nothing pisses me off more..but it totally worked with your poem and made it better...:P
Great job :D

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

this was an interesting piece of work and you uused imagery very well........

great job!!

:D

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

hi! ci. a monstrous task well-tackled. liked it. ;-)

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Awesome!!! I love it. That was so good. I suck at poetry but that is something I'm going to read over and over again. Keep it up ;)

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Woah! *shivers* don't hurt me...*trembles in a corner*
Crevil and a bit funny...me likey...

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

oooh. I like this. But then again I have a thing for killers. :D

I don't have time to log in but please check out my new story Life On The Murder Scene. Your comments would be appreciated.

Cheers!!!

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

funny i should come across this when yesterday i saw a car with the words 'for the horde' on it's rear window.. cool poem, by the way. do you play warcraft?

Posted: Jul 24, 2008

Very well stated! For some reason I am enmeshed by your writing technique and style. I hope to be able to read one of your novels soon. Keep up the good work! I do not think you are as dastardly as you want others to believe. ¥¿¥

Posted: Aug 9, 2008