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"The Beast"

Poem By: CanadianIdiot
Fantasy


The beast comes to kill you all... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 8, 2008    Reads: 43    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


“The Beast”

 

Slay the monster and spill his blood,

Or fall face down into the mud.

Unite with us and travel east,

So that we may slay the beast!

 

Yours truly has his plans for you,

And he’ll make sure you stay true.

If you dare wander away,

We’ll kill you and make sure your soul doesn’t stay!

 

Fight for your family and save your home,

So you won’t have to live life alone.

Your family will die,

So come with us and watch your family go to the sky!

 

The beast descends from the hill,

Roaring intensely and ready to kill.

You’ve slowed us down!

The beast’s face shows a fearsome frown!

 

He’ll kill us all!

We passed you the ball,

But you did not accept it!

You’re throat is better off slit!

 

Its coming; no chance now!

Stand tall and accept death’s row.

With a mighty flame,

We will face the beast’s fearsome bane!


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Comments:

powerful, nicely written, it has a lot of emotion attached to it. Keep up the good work.

Posted: May 8, 2008

Author Comment:

It must be the music I listen to. It gives me a good vibe and I get hyped up.

I really enjoyed this one as well.You're really a great writer.Very good imagination.I just really like your dark poetry.

Posted: Oct 19, 2008

Author Comment:

It seems to be my speciallty. I like the show the dark side of the world, exploiting it for what it really is. Not this flower-power "OH I LOVE YOU ALL!" type of place. I want to hsow the true dark side.



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