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Givers of life.....

Poem By: corujuca
Fantasy


Tags: life, stars, giving, birth, real

Some more thoughts about life ( i am getting bored ,don`t i') View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 27, 2008    Reads: 28    Comments: 1    Likes: 2   


it is not that

the stars talk,

we made them;

it is not that,

the animated cartoons

feelings they have,

(those , are ours....)

It  is  not that ,

we "connect" with

any books`s caracter,

but  with the author`s character.

Saving a life,

is the same that,

giving one...

A woman giving birth ,

that is ,

the real thing.

We are a life`s givers

wheter real or not,

therefore  we should use it

to create a better world.....


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Comments:

hi! corujuca. this is inspirational. although, v may not know that v r life givers, v should be responsible to make the world a better place. these r truly noble thoughts. enjoyed the poem very much. lol. ;-)

Posted: Aug 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for your comment,we all have the gift of giving life ,real through kids,not real ,through our imagination...



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