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.JUST A DREAM.

Poem By: Dark Skylight
Fantasy


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Submitted: Aug 2, 2008    Reads: 59    Comments: 4    Likes: 1   


JUST A DREAM

Your hopes are dead

and dry.

And you're all in gorgeous

pain.

Your cries are all in

vain.

No matter how loud

they are.

Sometimes it's all a empty

dot.

Like a hole in our space.

Black as night.Shine as the

star.


Maybe there is more but

tears and mystic screams.

And your cries are not in vain.

And you're happy,altough

is all just in dreams.

You see a yellow spot and you

think you're far away.

But no so far as today.

Just a tousand years

from now.

Fantasy taht will never

be a true.

Fantasy about the paradise

and white unisorn's.

But all it takes is second to

diesapear.

Just a blink of an eye and

all is gone.

Just a sparkle of reality and

it was all

Just

a

dream.



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Comments:

Mistakes:Unicorn's*,that*disappear*,....

Posted: Aug 2, 2008

Wow, very mystic and thoughtful poem. It really makes you wonder. It was absolutly beautiful. ^^

Posted: Aug 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Aww Thanks soo much!!
:)

how dreamy! it totally blew me away with the magic i felt :D
i love the part where you go
just
a
dream
its such a beautiful ending!!
and the rest of the poem is brilliant!*two thumbs up*

Posted: Aug 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you A LOOOOT!!I am so happy that you liked my poems.
Thanks thanks again.

:)

welldone! U got it write, Just the way i do dream you think every thing is real then suddenly you wake up to see that its all illussion or should i say not real but any way as i said earler you got it right.

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol,yes.THANKS FOR COMMENT! :)



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