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.Starlight.

Poem By: Dark Skylight
Fantasy


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Submitted: Aug 6, 2008    Reads: 45    Comments: 3    Likes: 2   


You and me.

Like two stars.

Shining so deeply,

but if you look closer,

just two lights in the dark.

Nothing special.

You see both of us,but then

suddenly you see on of us.

Standing there so alone.

While the other stars,lights,people

are happy together.

There is just you.

Without the other one.

He dissapeard.

Vanished.

Somwhere.

Went in a search for a

new star.

Leaving the old one there

all one.

Not coming back.

Not saying a word.

But he knows that you were

special.

Abd that he will never find the

one like you.

Because you are a

Starlight.

And still he leaves looking back.

Twisting truth.

Hoping all is illusion.

But still.

He left.


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Comments:

beautiful writing, but sad in the end where he leaves
but its awesome =]=]
i like XD
"Hoping all is illusion."
thats my favourite line ^^

Posted: Aug 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Aww,thanks for great comment.And for reading of course,and liking it.

:)

AWWWW this was a really cute and sad poem i really liked this. I like the metaphour in the beginning "You and me. Like two shining stars." But i also agre with XxDeathXxKissxX at the end when he still leaves her that was sad. Good job!:)

Posted: Aug 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol,thankss a lott!
Im gladd you liked this poem!

:)

this is a really cool poem! i like how its kind of revolve around stars. the last 4 lines are my favorite!!
Lemon

Posted: Aug 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Aww,thanks so much!:)



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