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This is about?How world ruined us all.And the world is people.We were doomed to death since the first breath was taken. View table of contents...
Submitted: Oct 8, 2008 Reads: 32 Comments: 4 Likes: 3
Black pheather,pink crow.
In the middle of a sky.
Dust under revolving up and down.
Proud eagle looking for food.
Humans praying for the rain.
Nothing will ever be the same.Plain comes,creature steps.
Earth lives become stoned.
Technology is dead,and water is already gone away.
Centuries before.
This people ruined all of us.
World fell apart long time ago.
When the forst breathe was taken we were doomed.
To death.
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Some spelling mistakes but apart from that i loved the theme...and this is one of my fav poems of urs...too good buddy....
People waiting for rain somewhere, and somewhere else flood is creating havoc and somewhere hurricane and cyclone too....and if everything is quiet, people r killing each other...
Posted: Oct 11, 2008
Great work on this.Very dramatic indeed.I like some drama in poems once in a while.It makes a little more interesting.I enjoyed this so much.
Posted: Oct 11, 2008
^^ its true...
Posted: Oct 11, 2008
Ah apocalypse.
Coming sooner than expected.
-Blacklust
Posted: Oct 17, 2008
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