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Inner Beast

Poem By: DarkFairy8907
Fantasy


A special poem written for a friend. She loves dragon's and anybody who loves dragon's as well should love this poem. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 1, 2007    Reads: 118    Comments: 15    Likes: 3   


Inner Beast

 

 

Child of wonder

Child of flame

Do you this night wish to remain

A human on the mortal plain?

 

A Dragon you could become

With a heart of flame

And a fork for a tongue.

 

Mighty wings could raise you up

Beyond the girth of a mighty gust

Just use your wings to give you thrust.

 

Thick and massive legs and arms

Are covered in bright scales

With this armor fear no harm.

 

A limber tail you will have

This deadly tail is spiked and barbed

Toss your foes like a rag.

 

A simple incantation you can say

Around you smoke and thunder fills the air

Transformed you are, be on your way

Fly away glorious Dragon it's a new day.


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Comments:

Always a winner - well at least if your a dragon fan like me. I love the imagery ^^ just wish I could really get hold of that spell...
Nice work

Hawk ^^

Posted: Sep 1, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks, I'm planning on giving it to Liathano for her Birthday present. I don't have money to buy her a statue or anything, but I know she will love it. Thanks again for the read.

~DarkFairy~


(not registered user)

great work! it gave a good follow up to your last one!
lionheart roars happily.

Posted: Sep 1, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks, I thought about originally combining the two, but that was before I finished this one.

~DarkFairy~

cool made me image i were a dragon. coolXD!!!!

Posted: Sep 1, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks that was the intention for the audience and person whom I wrote it for.

~DarkFairy~

nice, so really do u have that spell? lol i like this one a lot too. u are getting better and better with you poems, can u lend me some of ur talent? great work, 2 thumbs up or rather 5 stars

Posted: Sep 2, 2007

Author Comment:

No I don't have the spell yet, I'm still trying to find it, lol. I don't have a natural talent for coming up with poems like my sister (Worker of God) it takes her a couple of minutes to come up with a poem, it can takes me week or months to come up with one. But thanks for the apperciation, and the five stars.

~DarkFairy~

i wish i was a dragon, it would be heaps fun, or have a pet dragon that would be good to. this peopm is god ane realy enjoyable.

Posted: Sep 23, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks finally a response that didn't ask for the incantation to turn into a dragon. I'm glad you enjoyed it, hope you enjoy my others. But if you don't that's okay too.

~DarkFairy~

Bloody brilliant write. Not a huge dragon fan, I mean theyre great and all, but as far as mythological creatures go I prefer the gryphor, 'cause gryphori are fucking awesome! Anyway, good write.

Posted: Dec 30, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks for the comment, I love all mythological creatures. My friend really loves dragons, so I wrote her a poem, this one in fact for her birthday. She absolutely loved it. I'm glad you like it too. Thanks again.

~DarkFairy~

Wonderful poem!! I really love it!!! Of course, I like pretty much everything to do with dragons because, well, they rock! (Or roar)

An absolutely brilliant piece of work!!!




Posted: Jan 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, I'm glad it turned out so well that it has gotten many reads. Glad you liked it too.

~DarkFairy~

This was really good! ^^
like everything you have posted up!
It made me feel like I was a dragon..xD
if that makes any sense =]

**mandy[massacre]**

Posted: Jan 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Yep that made sense. It was the purpose of the poem. Everyone in my family and my friend who I gave it to were like okay what is the incantation to turn me into a dragon. I think I should write another part to this one with the incantation. It would be cool if it worked ;)

~DarkFairy~

Ienne
(not registered user)

That was really awesome!!! =D

Posted: Jan 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.

~DarkFairy~

Nice work. I'm a bit of a fan of dragons, some of my unpublished stories are full of them, and my shelves at home definitely are, but your poem really captures their graceful power and majesty.

Thanks for publishing it for us to read.

Posted: Mar 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Your welcome! I love dragons can't get enough of them. My friend is a dragon fanatic so I wrote her a poem, this one I believe for her birthday, she was estatic when I gave it to her. Thanks for reading.

~DarkFairy~

THeartnet
(not registered user)

Good one on dragons. Well Done.
Your friend is lucky That your good with poems and very much liked it as a gift.

Posted: Apr 5, 2008

Author Comment:

That's funny you didn't log in when you commented. Yes she did like it and her whole family was very impressed with it, though I still wish I had a different paper that I could have printed it on with dragons or something. I think it had leaves, but it still turned out great.

~DarkFairy~

another good dragon poem. did ur freind like this poem? cause ur summary says dat u made dis poem 4 a freind.

Posted: May 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes, she loved it, and her family was impressed with it.

~DarkFairy~

i. love. it.
It maks me feel like i could do just that...turn into a dragon.
Your writing is amazing

Posted: Sep 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks!

~DarkFairy~

A dragon fan huh? My wife too. The imagery was OUTSTANDING, i dunno why you haven't made a point to ask me to read your stuff before. Awesomeness

Posted: Oct 4, 2008

Author Comment:

^^ yeah I don't hide it! Again I don't want to ask to be read, I want to be found like a kid in a candy shop, you pick me up and love me!

~DarkFairy~

While I was reading,I could imagine a dragon as it was written.My dream is to fly like a dragon. Or a free bird.

Posted: Oct 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for being considerate of my time : )

Yeah I love this poem, never expected it to be as popular as it is.

~DarkFairy~
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