All Is Well

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Poem By: devilrod
Fantasy

I just can't remember what. View table of contents...

Submitted: Apr 27, 2008 Reads: 39 Comments: 2 Likes: 1

And I hear the closed mouths

Bickering and frothing

I feel the stilled mind

Receding within

The question are mounting

And I am becoming

Less and less concerned

And I will come to the point

To know enough

To not know a thing

The tiny wipers

Go back, and forth

Cleansing my mind's eye

All is...

Well?

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Comments:

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"To know enough to not know a thing"
That is it! :D
I am glad to notice your postings today,
on a less busyier day so I may enjoy them more :-D

Posted: May 1, 2008

Author Comment:

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, glad you did, thanks...

This is such an intricate description of such a feeling! I especially loved the part about the wipers, that was cool :D
Absolutely loved it to be quite honest, because it is so truthful and sounds so natural!
Well done!

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Well thank you TC. Letting go, or cleansing of mental, emotional and physical agitations brings help in so many different ways. Peace of mind and clarity of vision are usually what I'm looking for. luvluv