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Submitted: Mar 7, 2007 Reads: 126 Comments: 11 Likes: 1
Through the night we go
On the breeze, we claim our wings
A song of sweet kisses on our lips
That touch such lonely souls
Waiting in our path
We pour shivers down their spines
Like cold water down a parched throat
With our prescence felt
We expand, and gather speed
Strengthened by the energies that we release
Snatching the gasps
Of each wide eyed participant
Onward
In our haunting and delirious dance
Oh, the night is young
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I really like this one!
Posted: Mar 8, 2007
Oh My......I really liked this poem. I actually had "goosebumps" all over me. Excellent stuff.
Lucie
Posted: Mar 22, 2007
Love it, your language is so smooth and flowing, beautiful work d..I followed it as if I was in it.
Posted: Mar 23, 2007
good work, i love it!
Posted: Mar 31, 2007
I liked this peice. The way it steals into the imagination is great. Well Done!
Posted: Apr 3, 2007
Wow! Brilliant work, i read this at least three times over because it just flowed so eloquently. It also captured my imagination and took me along with it.
Well done!
Posted: Apr 17, 2007
wow, that is a really cool read!
Posted: Aug 4, 2007
very good, five stars
Posted: Aug 13, 2007
beautiful
Posted: Sep 10, 2008
Many a times when I've stood gazing at the night sky, being a lonely soul (glad-lonely, not sad-lonely), I have felt those benevolent night spirits pouring shivers down my spine, magnifying my experience of the elements. This poem captured all that and more.
It is nice to think that those spirits too were strengthened by the energies released. A give and take of delight.
Beautiful, soothing and calming, like the night sky.
Posted: Nov 22, 2008
After reading 'Saw it coming...' and feeling disturbed, I had to return to this to feel peaceful again.
It worked.
Posted: Dec 19, 2008
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