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Ever After Poem

Poem By: Kirsten Rain
Fantasy


A poem I just randomly wrote about ever afters and fairy
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Submitted: Jun 23, 2008    Reads: 54    Comments: 6    Likes: 2   


Ever After

What does that mean?

Is it something only fairy princesses get?

Ever After

Could it happen to me?

Even though I don't know a Prince Charming?

Or have a ball gown with glass heels?

Not even a fairy to help me along?

Ever After

Can it be real?

It could be because of how I feel.

I'd wait around forever to see you smile

I'd walk the deepest ocean to hear your voice

I'd climb the Empire State Buliding

If it ment six more minutes with you

Ever After

It's something you feel

It's in a person's love

and in the air

Ever After

It may not be true

For could you truly have an Ever After

With someone who barely knows you are alive?


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Comments:

REALLY GOOD! I LOVE the whole 'Ever after' concept. Very original.

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx!

This is really good Kirsten, you have a wonderful talent.

I'm brand new to this site so I would really love you to pop in and read my poetry and feel free to comment.

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much. I will definatly check out your work

THIS IS THE ORIGINALIST ( not the right sp, i know) THIG I HAVE SEEN YET! very good!

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you

this is my kind of poetry
lol
keep it up
:]

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you =)

Very imaginative, I hope to have an ever after some day in years to come. Hehe, now I have Ever, Ever After stuck in my head. I'll be singing that the rest of the day.

~DarkFairy~

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

haha I love that song lol glad you liked it

sara moon
(not registered user)





If I remember I started writing poems before I liked writing. I had them published and won awards.

I liked your poem and was glad I read it. Do you like to write poems?

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

yeah and thanks



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