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The Old Wooden Box

Poem By: loliee11
Fantasy


Tags: fantasy

The old wooden box is a rhyming poem that is humourous in many ways. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jan 14, 2008    Reads: 83    Comments: 11    Likes: 7   


The old wooden box,

had lots and lots of spots,

they were called the chicken pox.

Then it turned into a black box.

 

It aboarded a plane,

which flew down a lane,

the people thought the pilot of the plane was insane.

Yes, he was only capable of driving a train.

 

The plane is just about to crash,

and when it did it turned into trash,

across the sky they saw a red flash,

and following that they saw some black ash.

The black box fell with a clash.

 

They wondered how she died,

they wanted to find the black box that was in his last fly.

 

 

 

Just to say a black box is not actually black and is used to see what happened when a plane crashed. Is also known as a black box flight recorder.


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Comments:

haha. very interesting. very nice.

Posted: Jan 14, 2008

Author Comment:

yes i no

Nice effort.
Hope your years ahead are filled with a million more poems. Keep writing.

Posted: Jan 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Gee, thnx i appreciate it!

very good

Posted: Jan 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, Jen.Good luck on more pieces of writing.

Irwin
(not registered user)

Keep em coming Loliee!

Posted: Feb 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, I will I've published a new poem called Yummy Foods!

cool

Posted: Feb 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah we had to write a poem in school and i made one with my friend natalie. This is the one.

the poor black box...anyway, great job! =)

Posted: May 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks i created it in school.

That is very interesting.
~Kaori

Posted: May 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks

wow, very interesting! oh, did nat help you? hahha... wow, you have lots of fans! but i certainly understand; your things are great!

Posted: May 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah Nat did help me and thank-you.

:)

Posted: May 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol thanks.

Datz funny and alittle confusing.. But i dont get how a woman who died came into this? Like diz poem..and yes...it is interesting...

Posted: May 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, it might be a little confusing because I had to try and make it rhyme which was hard.

hi! sherry. u tickle my funny-bone. u made the black box famous. ha! haa!! haaa!!! lol. ;-)

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Hahaha lol yeah I made it with my friend Natalie at school. Thanks for the comment.



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