Save me from
falling.
Keep me from
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Save Me?
Poem By: Midnight Dreamer
Fantasy
What are you willing to do for someone you loved? View table of contents...
Submitted: Aug 13, 2008 Reads: 29 Comments: 2 Likes: 2
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Was this a poem or a short statement may need a longer run on sentences and perhaps a little more detail why this person needs saving.
Is it from yourself or do you need to be saved by god.
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SAVED
SAVED I'VE BEEN SAVED I;M NOT GETTING CHUCKED ON TO THE SKIP
CRAVED I FEEL CRAVED NOT KNOWING IF MY LIFE IS SAVED
NO OTHER LOVE HAVE I EVER KNOWN WHICH HAS CARRIED THE CROSS OF MY SHAME.
THIS IS HOW I KNOW WHAT LOVE IS HE CAME TO SAVE ME.
Posted: Aug 13, 2008
short sweet and excellent, i liked it.
Posted: Aug 13, 2008
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