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Submitted: Aug 18, 2008 Reads: 31 Comments: 2 Likes: 1
I cant breathe
I cant see
I cant do anything
I need you here with me
I want to feel your arms around me
Feel your body besides me
Feel it pulse with mine
Cant you tell I need you
That I love you
That I want you?
I’ll die if I don’t get you
You make me want to breath
Make me want to live
Make me want to love
You make me want you
Take me
Ravish me
Love me
Hold me
I’ll feel you someday
Just how I had dreamed
Laying besides you
You wanting every inch of me.
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Very sweet and nice. I like it.
Posted: Aug 22, 2008
i love the line about the pulse. it really gives life to the poem :) wonderful job, your word choice really establishes the emotion and tone of the poem very well!
Posted: Nov 17, 2008
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