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The Invocation: Y Cloechtoren

Poem By: Narduchil
Fantasy


Essentially this is the prologue of the Abredallacht the invocation that Argodan uses to call upon the power of Rhíata, Avie of song. This was clearly inspired by the invocation in the works of Homer. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Oct 31, 2007    Reads: 45    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


Hear me Rhíata, thee I sing

Whose voice exults in flowers fair

Within the leasows flourishing

Lies all in sorrow and despair

Whose bosom glows with subtle flame

In whose bright eyes is set the light

Of sun and moon, all blessed dame

Queen of the Gods, ally of night

Thou wont to lilt amongst the stars

In highest heaven frolicking

Cavorting now, seen from afar

Of gold and silver beckoning

From whose sweet lips like nectar flows

In moistened damps thy dew is wrought

Like falling streams no solace knows

Whose tears by mortal men are sought

Forsooth he hath gave unto thee

To hear no music ravishing

like song birds flitting, gathering

Nor harken to the crooning sea

Forespeaks the story of the world

To whom its faculties belong

Sing into me the past unfurled

Be ever gracious to my song

Say of the Green Years lost and fair

Forsake the sere path wavering

Of past and future quarrelling

Lies all in sorrow and despair


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Comments:

I love it!!!
It incorporates the senses a lot!
I love it!!!

Posted: Nov 2, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank You! I'm Glad you liked it, I'll be sure to read Destiny's Child Chapter Nine Soon!

I've never read Homer, but if the invocation is anything like this one I guess I should go read it. Great job and keep up the good work.

Posted: Nov 4, 2007

Author Comment:

Its not exactly like Homer's which I am surprised you never read, because I love the Iliad and the Odyssey and everyone ought to read it! Anyway that is really nice comment I appreciate it wholeheartedly. Thanks Again! :) :) Narduchil

Irwin
(not registered user)

you have a wonderful gift for nailing the right tone and turn of phrase for the period. I love it.

Posted: Nov 5, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank You! I really appreciate your comments. Its nice to hear from people who enjoy my work.



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