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The Fair Road

Poem By: OHSHCKaori
Fantasy


Tags: fantasy, fairies, fair

The Fair Road, do you want to walk? View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 13, 2008    Reads: 44    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   


A formal procession
A Royal promenade,
Happiness is tangible,
Excitement, contagious
The Fair ones walk
Their loved ones follow
For those who walk the Fair Road,
Say good-bye to your tomorrow,
 
For those who follow the Fair ones,
They find a wond’rous land,
Where sun is always smiling down
And sadness and sorrow die.
The berries are rich
The wine even richer
For on that long Fair Road,
Wishes come to the wisher.
 
Once you walk the Fair Road,
You may never go back,
Consider it wisely Traveler,
For once you leave, there’s no second guesses.
The Fair Road is tempting,
Tempting to all
But be wary stranger
Even the mighty can fall.
 
Once you choose your path,
You may never leave,
Your mind is made up,
The magic is binding.
Those who trod
On that long Fair Road
Loved that above all else
As their choice clearly showed
 
Those who walk the Fair Road,
Are Fair as Fair can be
But with a couple strangers
Perhaps two maybe three.
Those strangers as they say,
Shall wither and die,
For the Fair Road is not meant
For those who can not fly.


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Comments:

OH, this is FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!
such a wonderful read!
thankyou OHSHCK :-)
katie

Posted: Apr 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, I'm glad you like it. I was unsure of putting it on Booksie, because most fantasy readers are really particular, and this is slightly out of the norm.
Thanks.
~Kaori,

this is good Kaori! though i didn't really get it cuz i'm stupid like that (as you know) but still it's good

Posted: Apr 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Its about faeries and the road they take and how its not meant for mortal people -you- to walk.
Jeez your slow.

Dear KAORI,I dared to walk on the 'fair' road and suffered the bitter consequences BUT my MOM told me to "continue".....I would....This one re-inforced my belief...THANK YOU KAORI

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

I know, the "fair" road is such a beautiful, yet bitter place to walk. Yet the consequences are bitter yet wonderful.
~Kaori

Noel isn't slow I didn't get it either.

Posted: Oct 9, 2008

Author Comment:

It's okay. It was a joke. She's really not that slow, in fact she's quite bright.
`Kaori



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