
Random First Lines: That day Casper organised for one of the dragon caves to be prepared, though he warned that it would take a week... : Fantasy » Read
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Submitted: Jul 4, 2008 Reads: 40 Comments: 3 Likes: 2
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Hey scaza :) I love the tone in this one. The story is great and your structuring and word usage are awesome. This is just so unique...Make sure and tell me when you post more! Take care, Regan
Posted: Aug 4, 2008
WOW! Superb piece again. Looks like my "Death Catalyst Devil" has a brother in "The Serpent King"
:-D
Maybe we should write a joint piece together with both of them in it
Posted: Aug 12, 2008
You know, as I read this, I can't help but imagine some dark cavern full of half-snake half-man sort of creatures encircling some giant fire as they chant this very thing. I love it! Very wickedly evil tone. Nicely done.
Posted: Aug 15, 2008
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