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Serpent King

Poem By: scaza
Fantasy


Tags: fantasy

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Submitted: Jul 4, 2008    Reads: 40    Comments: 3    Likes: 2   


Serpent King!
Serpent King!
Whose eyes are glowing green!
 
Your handsome face
And loving charm,
No woman can resist.
 
Your forest home,
The seductive moon,
You lure them to your nest.
 
Your invincible strength,
Your great intelligence,
A pity for the girls.
 
You grab their souls,
As they lay weak,
For the woman that you love.
 
She lay on your bed,
As pale as stone,
The Empress of the Snakes.
 
One hundred souls,
Of virgin girls,
To bring her back again.
 
To feel her lips,
And ran your hands,
On her beautiful ebony hair.
 
To rule the world,
With her on your side,
To avenge her loving death.
 
Your venom army,
Of the silent ground,
As Serpent King once more.


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Comments:

Hey scaza :) I love the tone in this one. The story is great and your structuring and word usage are awesome. This is just so unique...Make sure and tell me when you post more! Take care, Regan

Posted: Aug 4, 2008

Author Comment:

I will. Thanks!

WOW! Superb piece again. Looks like my "Death Catalyst Devil" has a brother in "The Serpent King"

:-D

Maybe we should write a joint piece together with both of them in it

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks again. i guess i'll think about i. i'm glad you like it. :-)

You know, as I read this, I can't help but imagine some dark cavern full of half-snake half-man sort of creatures encircling some giant fire as they chant this very thing. I love it! Very wickedly evil tone. Nicely done.

Posted: Aug 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Ohh, thanks again. You seem to have a good imagination to have thought like that. Anyway, thanks.



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