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The fight

Poem By: Silver Main
Fantasy


Tags: fantasy, dragons

Just my first release {^_^} View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 11, 2008    Reads: 33    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


 

Terrifying Beasts in a dark nights embrace fly high through the sky

 Fighters line the village wall already fighting ghoul and troll

 Never expecting a savoir so dark

“You Girl, born in black fire, I Breath on deaths door

 Even if you kill a few…

 The rest will still kill you!”

 “Robert Gorl’a you know me not!

 Yes my powers were born in flames of the darkest fire!

But stay quiet, stay still

And my dragons will protect

And guard your village for evermore!

This I Promise You.”


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Comments:

I hate fantasy poetry. This is no exception. I think the flow was rather good, the form equally good. The beginning could use some work. Other than that it was okay, I hope to see some better work from you though, I know you're an awesome poet.

Posted: Mar 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for commenting...Not the best critic to hear from though...jk

A walk on the dark side

Posted: Mar 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks...I will load more of my work on eventually.

Wow, yuri-san CAN be mean, Sasha didn't know that, and yet it still sounds like a complimant, he is very good with words.

Posted: Mar 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes...But He has a few points...Thanks for reading "The Fight"



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