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Submitted: Mar 11, 2008 Reads: 33 Comments: 3 Likes: 0
Terrifying Beasts in a dark nights embrace fly high through the sky
Fighters line the village wall already fighting ghoul and troll
Never expecting a savoir so dark
“You Girl, born in black fire, I Breath on deaths door
Even if you kill a few…
The rest will still kill you!”
“Robert Gorl’a you know me not!
Yes my powers were born in flames of the darkest fire!
But stay quiet, stay still
And my dragons will protect
And guard your village for evermore!
This I Promise You.”
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I hate fantasy poetry. This is no exception. I think the flow was rather good, the form equally good. The beginning could use some work. Other than that it was okay, I hope to see some better work from you though, I know you're an awesome poet.
Posted: Mar 11, 2008
A walk on the dark side
Posted: Mar 12, 2008
Wow, yuri-san CAN be mean, Sasha didn't know that, and yet it still sounds like a complimant, he is very good with words.
Posted: Mar 13, 2008
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