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The Deadly Kiss

Poem By: Star Dust
Fantasy


Tags: vampire, kiss, blood

a deadly kiss.... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Feb 18, 2008    Reads: 235    Comments: 7    Likes: 0   


Dark, Dank, Dangerous

An empty, hollow, alley

walking Cautiously

holding her books

close to her chest

breathing deeply

heart racing

unsure of where

she is

scuffing her shoes

not wanting to

catch attention.

"whirl"

something is near

"swooosh"

it's getting closer

"hahahaaa"

it's laughing at her.

Hearing footsteps

crunching on gravel

coming toward her.

It stopped

stepping out of

the shadows

pale as the moon

smiling slyly

fangs glistening

he gives her

a look

she can't help

but feel safe

as she walks closer.

He grabs her waist,

pulls her close,

moves one hand

to push

her sholder-length

brown hair

away from

her throat.

he places

his finger

on her pulse

and smiles.

he dips her,

as if she

were a heroine

in the olden movies.

he trails kisses

down her throat.

Ecstasy, pleasure,

seering joy

rushing through

her 16 year old

body

light pressure

near her pulse

a pinch

then soaring high

from the bliss

sexual desire

runs through

her veins.

Then dark.

She feels life

slipping away

till all is gone.

He walks away

with blood

on his lips.

 

 

 


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Comments:

Get that wolf feeling in the end lines

Posted: Feb 18, 2008

Author Comment:

what do you mean?

I still love it just as much as I loved it this morning. It makes me want to jump up and do something... I just don't know what.

Posted: Feb 19, 2008

Author Comment:

well you have to read the other 11 pg. when i get them back tomorrow you can read them.
but is there anything you would change?

It was pretty good.

Posted: Feb 19, 2008

Author Comment:

pretty good? well than u have to read the other 11 pg. a friend is borrowing them right now.

OMG FIVE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted: Feb 19, 2008

Author Comment:

actually i have 12 pages now

Excellent ! You are very well creative .

Posted: Mar 27, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you I have more but I don't have time to write it on here. I didn't like the ending so I added to it and now it is about 50 pages long.

darlene
(not registered user)

i have better poems then this .I just cant put them on here because there to bloody and Suicidal for the public

Posted: Jun 30, 2008

Author Comment:

OOOOOOO! Well there is a horror categorie I am sure you could put them on here!!!

darlene
(not registered user)

no i cant i will get truned in for something i know it :

Posted: Oct 13, 2008

Author Comment:

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