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teddybear

Poem By: starlight1996
Fantasy


a teddy bear poem View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 4, 2008    Reads: 29    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


He sit's there all day on your comfy little bed coming alive

when theres a pillow to your head teddy loved you he's always bin there but could it be you just didnt notice his stare He sits there all the time waiting for you to see   that he wants to be your friend he dosent need an apology for all those time he was left on the floor your baby sibiling chewing... o the horror you may have got him for a specail occasion. or maybe hes just there.

teddy noticed when you cried that nignt,that night he didnt call he watched you weep but in your sleep he awoke and answered your call

Yes hes a teddy bear fabric and stuffing thats what some people think they can think but i know its not that way at all,its not that way at all because teddy always answers your call


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Comments:

really great. I, hereby promise to take notice of my teddy bear now. Thanks for making me see how he feels. Could you check my poem, Child X.

Posted: Aug 7, 2008

Author Comment:

hey thankz for the comment
i read already it was great ! loved it



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