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The Blade Of Faiya

Poem By: TheOdyssey
Fantasy


A story of an adventure through the fiery planes of oblivion. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 16, 2008    Reads: 36    Comments: 4    Likes: 4   


Through the depths of hell we go

Riden In the shadows

In search for the blade of woe

The enchanted blade Of Faiya

Demons on our tail as we ride upon the dragon

To the right and to the left, venom pulsing through my vains

Fighting hordes of demons, while we see pouring fires of rain 

But nothing can stop our way 'cause we have the might of the lion

We fought our way through the depths of hell, do I hear the devil cryin?

Hands on the sword, passing through the void back to the earth

we've got the blade the blade with a name

The enchanted blade of Faiya


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Comments:

Nice start, if you become addicted then...idk, well have 2 see. g/l and good dam rhyming, i cant do that.

Posted: May 16, 2008

Author Comment:

ok ty

This is really good! Keep up the great work!
I can't wait to read more of your work. This was amazingly written. (If that makes sense..lol)

~mandy

Posted: May 16, 2008

Author Comment:

lol thanks ill write more wow im sleepy 3 am lol

This is really good! Can't wait to read some more of your work

Posted: May 17, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks

Tor Steinsland
(not registered user)

Great prose. Keep writing, and you might turn this into a novel.

Posted: May 17, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks ill try lol



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