I think that this poem is very good and I hope u guys like it.

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

Eeek what a chilling poem! I wasn't expecting it to end like that. I like the emotion of this poem: the rage was palpable. Can't wait to read more of your work!

Stephanee :)

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

Oh, I forgot to include this in my first comment - 2nd stanza, last line: "thorugh" should be "through." Just wanted to let you know!

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

Misspelled words make you look less credible as a writer. Part of sharing your writing with others is being able to accept constructive criticism. If you don't want friendly advice you should specify on your profile that you can't take constructive criticism.

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

*scared a little*
Please tell me u didn't really do diz?
The poem iz a little scary.

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

I didn't honestly do this but I know that the crital thing in this poem is my spelling and the critisim is critcal, but the most important thing is that I care about what ppl think of my poems. I think they r magical.

Posted: Jun 6, 2008

I think it's a pretty good poem. Powerful, and I wish to read alot more of your writing.

Posted: Jun 6, 2008

nice poem but a bit scary.

Posted: Jun 6, 2008

hi! tisha. so finally she extracted her revenge. good job. keep it up. ;-)

Posted: Jun 7, 2008

Extremely powerful and I love the repetitive line 'the pain you put me through' - it makes the reader sympathise more with the persona. I love it!

Keep up the good work!

Olola.

Posted: Jun 17, 2008

Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned eh?
~Kaori

Posted: Jun 18, 2008