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Walking With The Shadows

Poem By: WerewolfWyeth
Fantasy


Tags: dark, drugs, alchohol

My first poem on booksie...with dark themes! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 26, 2008    Reads: 44    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


Walking With The Shadows

Charly sat there in the corner,

sitting on his leather chair,

with his eyes fixed on the window's border,

and he know's no one cares,

a couple of bottles and alot of pills,

he reached and turned off his light,

with a bad headache and feeling ill,

he got off his chair and headed for the night.


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Comments:

Hey Wolf :) Short, simple, and beautiful. I really liked how you did this. I'm definitely looking forward to more!

Posted: Jul 26, 2008

Author Comment:

BARK! BARK!

thanx

XD

wow! i really like the flow in this one and i luv how u named a person the word "Charly" just u know got me in it! this is wonderfull i read it again and again!

Posted: Aug 8, 2008

Author Comment:

yeah using random names does give writing a bit of sharacter....i think?



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