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Dreamers Mountain Ridge

Poem By: zenith66
Fantasy


another poem inspired by dreams of mine, hope you like this fantasical notion!!! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jan 22, 2008    Reads: 58    Comments: 5    Likes: 2   


 

At the edge of sea and land,

On this vertex where I stand,

Where the widening sea collides against the sky,

As the dreamlike distance inundates the eye,

 

Dark fingers of jagged light descend,

From the heavens which they rend,

Through the ages and the storm,

Briefly lighting cloudy forms,

 

And at the ceiling of the mount,

Where the swirling clouds fragment,

Split for miles by golden light,

Stretching ever toward the night

 

Whose sombre eyes possess a glare,

Wheel through space devoid of air,

Who captivate this earthly crowd,

With all the silence of a cloud...


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Felt that cloudy feeling.

Posted: Jan 22, 2008

Compelling read, with much intrigue. Thanks for sharing. Look forward to more. 'Like it' Ricky.

Posted: Jan 23, 2008

Extremely well written, fantastic imagery, nicely done!

-John

Posted: Jan 24, 2008

This is a fabulous piece of writing Zenith. I felt sucked into the vortex.

Posted: Jan 31, 2008

zenith this poem is amazing! I am captivated, totally wow! um I have added this to my reading list, and I don't do that very often..this poem is so amazing I am speechless, truly. take care...katie

Posted: Feb 22, 2008



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