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Poem By: zenith66
Fantasy


THE MANY FORMS OF THE MYSTERIOUS WINDS OF EARTH... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 23, 2008    Reads: 29    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


What says the wind that whispers still,

Between these trees that dot the hills,

With words that don’t resemble ours

Spoken softly or with power,

 

Whose voluminous body flies,

In wintry gusts mid evening skies,

Driving clouds from height to height

Tilting stubborn trees toward the light,

 

Shifting titian seas in waves,

And bunkers men indoors for days,

Or carry with the softest ease,

Downy flake from frosty tree,

 

Awaken earth from out its rest,

And usher in forgetfulness,

Mingle with the conscious seams,

But do not end this morning dream

 

It’s mournful howl beats fervently

Between this sleepy world and me,

Where voices rarely break the hum

Of rolling clouds in unison…


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Comments:

Awsome. THe words are very lyrical. i singed-song the whole way. Good Job describing wind too. hard to describe something you dont see.

Posted: May 27, 2008

lilypad1
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I don't understand why this piece hasn't received many more comments. It's stunningly beautiful. As a reader I felt carried by the gentle breeze of your words.
Soothing, graceful, and extremely well written.
Well done Lars.

Posted: Jun 10, 2008



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