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Divine Interference: Scene Two

Script By: Itania
Fantasy


Scene Two...

Oh, and I like this story so much, that I might turn it into a novel... (Probably while I'm writing four other novels, but this story has a definite pull.) View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 17, 2008    Reads: 34    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


Melonie: Guess... this ... is ... what... the ... dream... was . about. (gasping)

altChastity (Xena)

altBenevolence (Melonie)

Xena: Yeah. Damn.

Xena looks down and clasps her hands to her chest, blushing furiously. Several boys wolf whistle.

Xena: Damn it. Damn damn damn.

A high pitched squeel echos over the hill. Xena and Melonie look at eachother.

Unison:Xena and Melonie: Leann...

Three black shadows pass over the two, and two scantily dressed girls and one in a long cloak land infront of them. One has gold bat wings, one purple, and one midnight blue.

(In unison)Fallen: So, the messengers have finally revealed themselves.

Sorrow: How fortunate sisters! We shall have great fun destroying them, won't we Sister Fire?!

The other two girls twitter and giggle.

Fire: Oh yes of course Sister Sorrow! What say you Sister Death?

The last girl is covered in a long black her voice is raspy.

Death: Why of course. The sence of macabre around this pair is quite enthralling. I will search further into the future...

Death spins on one foot, flaps her purple wings, and flys off. By now all the bystanders have scattered.

Sorrow looks over at Fire, her blond hair swirling around her face.

Sorrow: Shall we leave them to contemplate their fate?

Fire: Oh yes! I'm thirsty!

The pair look at each other and giggle. Then they turn, and fly away.

A boy runs over to Xena and wraps his arms around her.

Milo: Xena! Are you okay?

Xena: No! Damn it Milo! I've got two giant birds wings sprouted out of my back and you have the nerve to ask me if I'm okay?! Stupid...

Melonie: Xena... be nice. He is your boyfriend.

Xena: What ever.

Milo: Just making sure love. Do you need anything? An ice pack? Some Asprin?

Xena: No. Just you.

The pair begin to kiss, and Melonie turns away, making vomiting motions and pretending to jam her finger down her throat. When the pair does not stop, Melonie coughs gently.

Melonie: You know. I don't think you're even Chastity, like in the dream. For one thing, you're half naked in public.

Xena stops kissing Milo and grabs at the remnants of her shirt.

Xena: Yeah! Half! S'not illegal!

Melonie: Yes, it is . It is illegal.

Xena: You've got to be kidding me!

Another shadow crosses the two, and another girl lands infront of them. Xena smirks.

Xena: Leann. You ARE the third angel! Ha!

altFreedom (Leann)

Leann: Yes! So what? We're all dead anyway! Did you see those other girls? Creepshows the lot of them!

Melonie (Shuddering): I know! Hey, I don't know if you noticed Xena, but that Fire girl looked kind of like Cassandra.

Xena: I know! Gah! My arch enemy is really my enemy now!

Melonie: We should get home.

Xena: How?

Leann: Fly.

Xena and Melonie: WHAT?

Leann: Duh. you have wings! You can fly you twits!

Melonie: She's right you know. We do have some pretty big wings...

Xena: And we do need to get home...

Leann: It's easy. Trust me.

Xena and Melonie look at each other. Xena stands up, tying her shirt remnants about her chest, trying to keep herself covered. She spreads her wings and flaps them expirementally. As her feet leave the ground, she shrieks and stops flapping. Xena tumbles to the ground.

Xena: Oww...

With that Leann crouches on the ground and pushes off of it and flaps her wings (which are black) She hovers in the air, waiting for the other two.

Leann: Coming?

Melonie flaps her wings and takes off. Xena regains some of her composure, straightens a wing feather, and uses one of the tips to brush herself off. Then she follows the other two.

To be continued in Divine Interference: Scene Three


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Comments:

Well... it sucks that their shirts were ripped apart.

This is good.

Keep writing,
Italy

Posted: Aug 17, 2008

Author Comment:

yeah. and that one shirt that Xena had on was one of her favorites. Oh well...

it DOES suck about their shirts...haha. i liked the whole, 'it's not illegal' 'yes it is' conversation. XD
totally AWESOME!!!! LOVED IT!!! THE WHOLE THING!!!!
:D

Posted: Aug 21, 2008

Author Comment:

cool! thanks! I'll tell you when scene three is out!



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