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Werewolf!!!!
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my first werewolf short story!
I actually wrote this back in June but just got around to posting it todayy.. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 22, 2008    Reads: 95    Comments: 5    Likes: 3   


She felt hands grasp her neck.  She couldn't breath, move nor scream.  Her heart was pounding rapidly in her ears.  A face leaned forward, one of which had not been there before.  It was not a face of a human but one of a beast.  Its fur coat was shaggy and full with such a beautiful golden brown tint to it that she was mesmerized.  Its sweet eyes didn't not look dangerous.  No, they looked mornfull, as though they did not want to hurt her.  Its eyes were beautiful blue, almost like sea glass.  She had never seen any eyes like them before. 
The face continued to become closer and closer to hers.  Closing her eyes, she heard a low growl than a high pitched yelp, as though someone or something was in pain.  Her eyes opened and saw that there was no longer a beast in front of her, but a young man.  His hair was the same mesmerizing color, as were his eyes.
She was confused.
The young man continued to lean torwards her, just as the beast had done.  He released his hands from around her neck and proceeded to try to tuck a strand of her dark brown hair behind her ear.  Before he could succeed she reached her hand up and stopped him.
Instead of stopping, he moved his hand to cup her chin.  Softly he kissed her on the lips.  She was surprised at how soft his lips were.
He pulled away from the kiss and smiled.  He started to walked backwards, away from her but not before grabing her hand and lightly kissing it.
He started to dissinigrate, right before her eyes until no trace of him remained except the lingering memory that stained her mind.


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Comments:

wow. very wicked and suspenseful. i liked it! write more and keep me updated. xD

Posted: Aug 22, 2008

Author Comment:

haha
thanks
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and I will

why did he have to leave so wrong!

Posted: Aug 22, 2008

Author Comment:

haha
I dunno
I might write a sequal to it though
or maybe a novel

ouu, tres intense, lol. I loved the whole thing...And I think it would be a VERY good idea to continue this;)
Steph(:

Posted: Aug 23, 2008

Author Comment:

haha
I think this and my vampire short thing will be my next two novels
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wow, that was bloody awesome!

Posted: Aug 27, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you
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I commented this on my other account a really long time ago. It's still really great, the suspense is amazing. :)

Lids♄

Posted: Nov 6, 2008

Author Comment:

haha
thanks
I forget who comments on my stuff
Opps
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