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A very short story about a car ride with Death in the passanger seat.....
I think its vaguely funny in a dark humour kind of way....
Before anyone jumps on it, it isnt an anti smoking message. Mind you he is right they will kill you eventually.
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Submitted: Feb 21, 2008 Reads: 73 Comments: 6 Likes: 7
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This is good read. I had to take a second read of "We discussed the news of the day and general small talk about the weather being so cold. He said it kept him busy." I almost missed it. Great job.
Posted: Feb 21, 2008
Really liked it Boneman - a poetic story in my way of thinking. Yah! Glad I don't smoke but death hovers around honing in on lots of other things we do (or things beyond our control) I loved the way you tackled this, gave a dark subject a light hearted edge.
Posted: Feb 21, 2008
boney,
i loved this story, treating death in an almost lighhearted way. i guess he will get us all one day, its just a matter of where and when.
your friend
snow xxx
Posted: Feb 22, 2008
Clever!!!
Posted: Feb 22, 2008
Boneman, it was really good. I had to read it twice to 'get' it. Death is really right there, whether we want him there or not. Interesting that he was smoking. I quit smoking almost 8 years ago: Best thing I did for myself and for the people around me.
MA
Posted: Feb 23, 2008
I love it! Death is an old friend to me in my wrighting. And in much of my other interests (archaeology, anthropoloyg, history). It all comes to death in the end.
Posted: Jun 18, 2008
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