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Submitted: Mar 4, 2008 Reads: 61 Comments: 3 Likes: 1
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It's a very descriptive story, captured my imagination from the start. I might suggest paragraphs but it's not a problem being as short as it is. This was a nice read, I look forward to more! ~ Nixie
Posted: Mar 4, 2008
This is a great piece of flash fiction. This would make a great story if you expanded the beginning.
Posted: Mar 5, 2008
this is really good, like everything else you write. your words are so special, they're like perfectly picked. although i do not believe in things being perfect.
Posted: Mar 29, 2008
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