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The great profound remorse of sinners

Short story By: Cosmicorphan
Fantasy



Ready to enjoy the product of my Tedium? Jesting folks! On the contrary, enjoy my last updated fantasized short story "The Great profound remorse of sinners". It contains a genuine advice, eyeball to eyeball, heart to heart, mind to mind. Without any further delay, enjoy it, anticipating also decent comments regarding the subject of the Hellfires and damnation.
My best regards,
Cosmic Orphan.


Submitted:Jul 14, 2012    Reads: 21    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   


Hell? It's already over? Clock stopped ticking? Pandemonium? Blood shed? Guts Everywhere? Demolition? Death Ropes? An after-life? What on earth is going on!

O' the great profound remorse!

Found himself walking alone sweating, knees and arms exceedingly heavy, sockets are colder than an ice cube, fingers trembling... Walking among fiery hellish skulls, deadly thorny black roses filled with malice, six-headed beasts hunting disbelievers down... O' the profound remorse! The twelve eight horns creatures eating the remains of human's flesh, death grims hovering with their gigantic dreadful smouldered pole-axes, stalking wicked sinners mercilessly!

O' the great profound remorse!

Saw himself in the wicked dark place where there is NO place to escape, NO place to hide; within

thorny black roses filled with malice, six-headed beasts hunting disbelievers down... The eight horns creatures eating the remains of sinners' flesh agitatedly, death grims hovering with their gigantic dreadful smouldered poleaxes, stalking wicked sinners mercilessly!

O' the great profound remorse!

Saw where sinners running naked. Their Throats slashed from ear to ear, and slained. Nauseous ripped flesh from their bones, stab-wounded in their hearts. Screaming, yelling, suffering, horrified, persecuted from the damnations of their sins regretting about every single wrong-doing, and each nano-second they have passed doing the prohibited they've done with profound remorse.

O' the great profound remorse!

Saw bloody tears, saw scars, saw the real pain echoed through the diabolical craving red depth blazed fire that sinners were promised by.

Saw damned sinners drinking, eating the disgusting acrimonious remains of pus, guts and sour-fruits that boils in their bellies.

O' the great profound remorse!

He has been in the spot, gazing at what happened in there progressively... Speechless, aghast, despised, deeply paralyzed. Fighting his fears, facing the reward of his deeds, anguishing from the agonies of the hell fires, and seeking for sympathy.

Hoping in the awakening, if that nightmare isn't real.

Equally Heaven and hell established on the mind of man kind. The moment we think of something goodish, or in other words "good-deeds", right after there we would be able to take the right tickets to heaven where God and Angels dwells. Yet, again, and as soon as we thought evil of somebody, judging someone else and cherish each wrong thoughts about them, then we would surely take the wrong tickets which leads us to enter into hell. Simple as heck; as I always say "Heaven we make; hell we make". With our sacred thoughts we create Heaven. With our wrong, undignified, graceless thoughts, we create hell within us right into our heart, soul and mind. Heaven and hell are both states of consciousness deep inside us, hence, it depends on human's integrity and uprightness.

Thus, what I've to say, unlock your heart, be liberal, open your eyes, learn to love and unlearn maliciousness.

O' Supreme God! I seek refuge with You from powerlessness, slothfulness, faint-heartedness, stinginess, and frail old age. I seek refuge with You from the torment of the grave. I seek refuge with You from the penalization of Hell, and I seek refuge with You from the trial of life and death.

Amen.





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