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A short story of Kaelis, cleric of Vaiva (or Shawkenesis). This was mildly inspired by him being locked in an inn room, and mildly inspired by the work of Stephen King. View table of contents...

 

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It was late, and Kaelis was tired. He had been spent the last three days without rest, hiding out in the mountains, pursued by a large group of frost giants. He had

finally escaped and managed to make his way back to Tanamerah, and the only thing he wanted was to sleep. He stumbled into the Inn of the Comfortable

Saddle, and walked over to the innkeeper. "A room" he said. "Just give me one, I don't care which." He handed over some gold, and the innkeeper replied "Of

courseMaster Jarinthar. Room number 5 is open. Taking the key the innkeeper held out, Kaelis slowly trudged up the stairs, ready for nothing more than peace

and rest. He found his room and inserted the key to open the door. But when he pushed, it remained stuck. He grunted, then slammed it once with his arm. The

door flew open, and he walked inside, pulling the key out and locking the door behind him as he closed it. He looked around the room, noting that it was furnished

fairly comfortably. He turned to the bed and began removing his armor, carefully placing each piece to the side. He took time to lean his shield and blade against

the wall, then he felt something was wrong. He spun around immediately, to find.... nothing. He walked over to the door and checked it, ensuring it was locked. It

was, so he turned back to the bed, then immediately took a step back. His armor, which he had simply piled on the floor, was now neatly lain out, as if being worn

by an invisible person lying on the floor. He looked closer, noting that something was wrong in the layout. His helm was next to where feet would be, and his

sword had been stabbed into the floor point first, where his head would have been. He grasped the blade and attempted to pull it from the floor, but it remained

stuck. Taking a deep breath, he heaved with all his might, and the sword came loose. He leaned forward to examine it, and suddenly dropped it. Blood covered

the blade, fresh blood. He stared down at his weapon. "That's...... impossible," he muttered, taking a step back. "What is this?" A moan came from behind him,

and he spun about instantly. A woman stood behind him, clothed in a blue dress, her long, golden hair flowing about her. The blood drained from Kaelis' face, and

he stuttered "Tri.....Trista?" The shadows in the room deepened, and from one of the walls came an immense hand of night, which grabbed the woman. "Trista!"

Kaelis screamed as he dove forward. But the hand vanished into the wall, carrying its burden with it. Standing back up, Kaelis searched the room frantically.

"Trista? Trista?" he cried. The walls changed again, into mirrors showing various images. Kaelis turned rapidly, attempting to keep track of all of them, all of the

Trista's he could see. Here, she was torn apart and devoured by a horde of demons. There, she was flayed with chains of flame, then speared through with

massive stakes. In a third place, her bones were shattered and broken one at a time, then she was drowned. Kaelis fell to his knees, weeping. "Trista, I am so

sorry Trista.... I have done my best......" he cried. Through blurry eyes, he looked up, yelling out "Vaiva! Aid me, I beg of you!" He felt power surge through his veins,

but it lasted only a second before fading. The comforting touch of his deity was lost to him, and his pleas were useless. Lying on the floor, Kaelis could do nothing

but listen to the screams of his beloved, echoing all around him. Suddenly, new determination filled him, and he pulled himself to his feet, uttering a single word.

"No." Screaming in rage and heartbreak, he whipped his hands through the air, and fire came to his call. The floor burst into flame, and the screams grew greater,

as if the room itself was wailing. Laughing maniacally, Kaelis roared, "No, I will not stand for it. You will never harm her again. I swear it!" The flames grew higher,


and Kaelis' flesh began to sear, burnt off his body, but he felt no pain. As the fires consumed him, he stood triumphant.


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hi! john.

1. JOHN: The name of John has made you serious-minded, responsible, and stable. You love the security of a home and family, you are fond of children, and, as a parent you would be fair and understanding. Although you have good business judgment, you are not aggressive in your dealings because you do not like to create issues. You would be successful in any position dealing with the public as you have a diplomatic and tactful manner and possess a charming, easy-going nature which puts people at ease. People are drawn to you because they feel that you are patient, kind, understanding, and responsive.


2. JOHN CHAPLIN: There are 11 letters in your name. Those 11 letters total to 56. There are 3 vowels and 8 consonants in your name.

What your first name means: Shakespearean Male 'Henry IV' Prince. 'Henry VI' John Talbot. 'King Henry VI, III' John Mortimer, Montgomery, & Somerville. 'King John'. 'Merry Wives of Windsor' John Falstaff. 'Much Ado About Nothing' Don John. 'Richard II' John of Gaunt. 'Romeo And Juliet' Friar.
Hebrew Male Jehovah has been gracious; has shown favor. In the bible John the Baptist baptized Christ in the Jordan river. Variants have been created in almost every language.
Biblical Male The grace or mercy of the Lord

Your number is: 11
The characteristics of #11 are: High spiritual plane, intuitive, illumination, idealist, a dreamer.

The expression or destiny for #11: Your Expression number is 11. The number 11 is the first of the master numbers. It is associated with idealistic concepts and rather spiritual issues. Accordingly, it is a number with potentials that are somewhat more difficult to live up to. You have the capacity to be inspirational, and the ability to lead merely by your own example. An inborn inner strength and awareness can make you an excellent teacher, social worker, philosopher, or advisor. No matter what area of work you pursue, you are very aware and sensitive to the highest sense of your environment. Your intuition is very strong; in fact, many psychic people and those involved in occult studies have the number 11 expression. You possess a good mind with keen analytical ability. Because of this you can probably succeed in most lines of work, however, you will do better and be happier outside of the business world. Oddly enough, even here you generally succeed, owing to your often original and unusual approach. Nonetheless, you are more content working with your ideals, rather than dollars and cents.

The positive aspect of the number 11 expression is an always idealistic attitude. Your thinking is long term, and you are able to grasp the far-reaching effects of actions and plans. You are disappointed by the shortsighted views of many of your contemporaries. You are deeply concerned and supportive of art, music, or of beauty in any form.

The negative attitudes associated with the number 11 expression include a continuous sense of nervous tension; you may be too sensitive and temperamental. You tend to dream a lot and may be more of a dreamer than a doer. Fantasy and reality sometimes become intermingled and you are sometimes very impractical. You tend to want to spread the illumination of your knowledge to others irrespective of their desire or need.

Your Soul Urge number is: 7
A Soul Urge number of 7 means: With a number 7 Soul Urge you are very fond of reading, and retreating to periods of being alone and away from the disruptions of the outer world. You like to dream and develop you idealistic understandings, to study and analyze, to gain knowledge and wisdom. You may be too laid back and withdrawn to really succeed in the business world, and you will be much more comfortable in circumstances that are tolerant of your reserve, your analytical approach, and your desire to use your mind rather than your physical being.

You are very timid around people that you don't know very well, so much so at times that casual conversation and social situations can be strained. You tend to repress your emotions to the extend that some people have a good bit of difficult understanding you. You tend to be very selective with friends and you don't easily adapt to new environments or to new people very quickly.

The negative traits of the 7 include becoming too much the introvert and isolated from others.

Your Inner Dream number is: 4
An Inner Dream number of 4 means: You dream of being a very solid citizen that people can depend upon. You strive for organization and predictable order. You want to be recognized as a person with a plan and the discipline to make that plan work like clockwork.

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