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Just a little sneek peek into my thoughts for my sequeal to Unwanted Destiny. This will only make sense if you have read through my old version. But those who are daring to get a glimps of what happened are welcomed to read as well. Hope you enjoy and let me know what you think. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Feb 23, 2008    Reads: 72    Comments: 8    Likes: 2   


Deep within the confines of the Underworld a shadowy figure lurks through the endless caverns and tunnels; searching for their master. The atmosphere gradually becomes hotter and hotter.

 

“I must be getting closer.”

 

Further the being traveled into the fiery furnace. Cloaked in a deep violet hooded robe, the Sorceress Monica approached one of the Underworld pits. Every pit around bubbled and spit fiery, molten earth rock. But this pit was seemly different. It spewed molten earth, but it also had a black substance mixing throughout it. This substance was what Monica had been searching for. She raised her hood revealing an aged woman. From beneath her robe she withdrew a book. She stroked her hand across it’s cover feeling the engraved lines and curves of letters. These letters made up a language long forgotten by man, only surviving by the hands of black magic. She opened the book, carefully turning the fragile aging parchment. Turning to her page she looked over the title of the spell. “Diavol Reincarnare.” Raising her hand over the pit she recited the spell.

 

“A se ridica din nou pierdut suflet. O data din nou a putea voi stapanire aceste lume.”

 

The black substance separated itself from the pit. It rose into the air and gently settled onto the ground, the slick black substance began to mold and shape itself into a familiar form. It had solified presenting the form of a person in a long black hooded robe who had long silver hair, pale skin and blazing red eyes.

 

“Welcome back to the world of the living Xanamros.”

 

Xanamros turned toward Monica and sneered a wicked smile. “Yes it is. Now then, there is work to be done.”

 

 

*Please, please, please let me know what you think.  I'm having writer's block and need some encouragement.  I have the first chapter written up but won't post it until I'm finished with my revised version of Unwanted Destiny.  And thank you to all who read.  ~DarkFairy~


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I want more!
...Now I'm gonna like obssess until I get the rest.
... And someone's been evil and using cliffhangers like me... O_O

Good job! Can't wait for the sequel, or the revision of Unwanted Destiny!

*~*Marisa*~*

Posted: Feb 23, 2008

Author Comment:

I have up to chapter 5 of Unwanted Destiny revised I'm going to try to work on 6 today for a friend's sake. I have ideas for chapters 2-4, but haven't written it out yet. If you give me your email I can send you what I have down for the first chapter so far.

I'm glad you liked it though and yes, I'm getting better at the cliffhangers, I did learn from the best, aren't cliffhangers just the best to tease our readers with, lol. And yeah you were my first comment:D

~DarkFairy~

i love it!!!! im so glad you got over your writers block...ish. I mean, it's a start!!! :D

And you will never get Joe because as mysterious as you are, I am a Hannah Montana back up dancer and have moves YOU HAVEN'T EVEN SEEN BEFORE!!!!!MUHAHAHAHAHA

lol Please keep writing though...and i might let you borrow him.

Posted: Feb 23, 2008

Author Comment:

I have the first chapter written, but I feel it needs more. I'm still in my writer's block though, but am slowly breaking away at it. I have ideas for a couple of chapters, but nothing down on paper yet. Thanks for commenting.

~DarkFairy~

Lionheart
(not registered user)

You better go through with this or i will personally make sure a rabbit mutilates you through a series of unfortunate events!!!!
But now i have to wait...... ugh!! Get a move on woman!!

Posted: Feb 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Hey I still have writer's block, leave me be. I have the first chapter written up, but have gotten stuck after that. I have ideas I'm working on. Plus I'm still revising the first book. But I promise I will post it, once I figure out my entire story line. I still need a title too.

It's an entire work in progress, but it will get there have patience.

~DarkFairy~

There should really be an I love it button >_<
and to think how far you've come, form this random girl I found reading my novel to someone whos kinda close, well probably over stripping my own writing ~grins~ love it as always Dark, and keep it up, you've got me proud at least hehe.

Later
Hawk ^_^

Posted: Feb 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah you read it even though you've read more than I've posted just here. I would have never in found your novel if Liathano hadn't introduced me to it. I'm glad you loved it, and yes there should be a I love it button. I'm working on ideas and will run them through you before I do anything, you have some catching up to do with me now, hehe.

~DarkFairy~

wow,
I love it, so mysterious and keeps you guessing. More please. :)

Posted: Feb 27, 2008

Author Comment:

I debating on adding my first chapter, but I'm not sure. I don't feel like it's complete. I'm waiting for a friend's answer to decide whether I do it or not. Thanks for reading. You should check out the first novel that this is playing off of.

~DarkFairy~

whoah...
this
is
amazing...
i can't right like this
^^
:)

Posted: Mar 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Hehe, thanks I've improved greatly since I first started, but I still don't think I'm up to where I could be one day.

I bet you could write like this if you gave yourself time. I actually only came up with this in a matter of hours as it had been in my thoughts for months. It's easy to write like this when you lose yourself to your thoughts and just write what you're thinking. Thanks for the read and comment and for becoming a fan.

~DarkFairy~

It is a good start, you have a good sense of detail and it seems to put the reader right there with the characters.

Posted: Mar 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks I'm glade I've started out good from just writing from my thoughts. I try my best.

~DarkFairy~

Xanamros alive again????
Something cold just clamped my lung... This is gonna be fun.

Posted: May 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol, did you read the orginal?

~DarkFairy~



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