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IMPROVISED WRITING OF SUPERNATURAL ABILITIES- THE SEQUEL TO THE SOUL OF RABIM

Short story By: Fahmid
Fantasy


Unique things and strange things happened at last. The Darker Sequel!


Submitted:Jun 30, 2010    Reads: 41    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   


IMPROVISED WRITING OF SUPERNATURAL ABILITIES
(THIS IS NARRATED BY ROBIN)
Remember me, the writer? I afraid you will not remember. My introduction was told by Mehrab, my best friend and brother. Well, The Soul of Rabindranath Tagore was the part of my story. My story begins with 2024, the time my son became a legend. But how? Know it!
My son's name was Rahil Khan. He was quite a rock star. Well, this begun as when I went to his school, I saw him got beaten up by a bully. I was about to stop them but they ran away. His mouth was bleeding and I took him to my house. He was filled with unconsciousness. I made him lay on his bed and took my first-aid box and gave him some band-aid. When he woke up, he saw me curiously. "Dad!" exclaimed Rahil. "My son, I saw that you got hit by your foe, Roger! If your mom was here, she would protect you more than I do. She was passed away after your birth". Rahil said "I am sorry Dad! I didn't mean to hurt you". I said "Don't be sorry. So what's up with your project?" Rahil replied "Well, I had just finished it. I researched the brain a lot". I announced "Tomorrow, we will go to Rainforest". Rahil agreed because he wanted to explore the rainforest.
At night, Rahil sat on his computer and started to chat. Suddenly, a mysterious ID added him. He typed with his own way of greeting. Rahil was surprised that his ID has dots and no e-mail address. The color of the computer changed after 10 minutes of chatting. He felt strange and he chatted more. He mentioned his name as Rocky. He said that Rahil would meet him on the rainforest where we were visiting.
Next day, Rahil and I went to the Rainforest. I met a forest ranger named Oli and his brother Abdul. They had experienced a lot of vampires in the rainforests. At night, we three were camp-firing, talking about ghost stories and what happened in the rainforest. We went to the wooden cabin and slept. Suddenly, Rahil woke up, I saw him went outside the rainforest but it was so misty that he could not see anything. He went back to the cabin. He heard a mysterious voice singing in a girl's voice. He went out of the cabin again; he saw that a shadow went to an old hut. He crept inside the hut and saw that a deer slept. When Rahil was about to touch the deer, he saw that the deer became blue and cold. The shadow glowed and came out of the deer's body. The body vanished and the shadow turned out to be a text written as:
WELL, A FRIEND IS WAITING FOR YOU. YOU HAVE TO WRITE YOUR
FEELINGS IN A FICTIONAL WAY TO PUBLISH IN THE RAINFOREST.
He went back to the cabin and saw that we were still sleeping. So he slept with us. After that in the next morning, he woke up and followed us to a lake. The lake was so hot that everyone could be dead. I had forbid him to swim in the lake. "Everything happens in the night. Such supernatural things we haven't experienced before" Oli said. We were surprised except Rahil because he got the information from his 'unknown' friend Rocky.
At night Rahil put his writings on trees and went to the hot lake. He saw that the lake became a sea and its waves came up and reflected with blue crystal color. He was curious and the shadow came again turned out to letters:
THE PASSWORD OF THIS GATE IS
MYTHS OF SALVATION.
WRITE IT!
Rahil put his fingers to the wave and wrote the same password. He went inside the wave and suddenly saw that there were the same trees from the forest. He saw a red paint and he followed through it. Suddenly, he saw a body of a girl laid down. The shadow came out. "I am Rocky" the shadow suddenly said. Rahil cried with surprise "A girl! Rocky! Are you a ghost or something?" The shadow replied "I am Eqra Habib. May be you would not recognize me but I recognize you. I had died when we were fourteen year olds. I was a kid too. I was obsessive with you once but when you left Bangladesh, I planned to find you in Canada. I was looking for you all over but I never know you have passed me with your new face. You had grown so older but I was started to hate you. When I went to the trip to the forest, I just committed suicide and I kidnapped many missing people. I want you to challenge me with a mythological battle. Now I will kill you as a spirit." She was about to stab Rahil but a torch reflected the spirit that she went away.
It was none other than Oli, Abdul, my friend Mehrab and I. Oli used the torch light and I called Mehrab on phone and he came. Next day, Rahil wrote something about mythological creatures. I just doubted him about that. Next night, I saw a page glowing and all the strange creatures came out of the pages. When I called Rahil, he saw and he exclaimed. There were unicorns, gryphon, centaurs, giant scorpions, dragons and werewolves. We all went to the lake and Rahil opened the lake wave with the password. We had followed the red trail and we saw the shadow and all the powerful creatures stood on the opposite side of us but a meter distance. Rahil commanded us to charge. The battle had begun. Rahil wrote everything and he even called people from his relation with his writing. Suddenly, they came by fading out. The battle grew more powerful. Everything combined and all became pure white light. They enemies were destroyed and all faded away. The wave and the lake busted out and we flew away. All the missing people were tired and we all helped them. Even Oli and Abdul's missing wife, Sheena and Abdul's wife.
A MONTH LATER………
Everything of Rahil's books had been published and even the adventures of him in the forest. I was proud of him. He had performed in a school program by singing, dancing and playing guitar. I wished Nahida would be here to see his rock star son with a new body and everyone praised him especially girls. This is the end and Pump It Up!




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